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Reviews for River Rapids

By : jemstone5
  • From ANON - Millen Stryker on September 11, 2006
    All I can say is: The hunt is ON!
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  • From ANON - Lorna on September 05, 2006
    Maybe I should stop reading so much, stories are starting to run together. This is a sign when you start confusing Humans and Predators.
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  • From ANON - Lorna on September 05, 2006
    Sorry, I just hate him. He can rip off a cheek and pretend it's a mandible. kill. I do not condone violence but in this case make it legal.
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  • From jemstone5 on September 05, 2006
    Ah, Lorna, just a reminder. Heeno is human. he doesn't have mandibles. but that don't meant that Tan'ock wont rip off something else. (evil authur grin) :D
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  • From karmaxp on September 05, 2006
    Heeno must be crushed under the boot of all that is good. Make him into glue or something. Have someone rip off his mandibles and stab him with them. Kill him
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  • From ANON - Prairiefire on September 03, 2006
    Just when I was going to give you a boot in the keyboard.

    I must tell you I love waking up to your updates.

    Heeno must die. Tan'ock must kill him. Girls must be saved. Nothing must happen to Chonie. Babies must come, NOW!
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  • From ANON - shortest_warrior on September 03, 2006
    I hate Heeno Jemstone. Please have Tan'ock kick his ass. Maybe the young bloods might be able to take home some ooman mates as well. Great chapter, need more, Please.
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  • From ANON - Millen Stryker on September 03, 2006
    Heeno needs to die... BADLY!! And will his yucky friends. I hope Chonie apologizes to Tan'ock for being a foolish and stubborn woman. All the warning signs were there before her and she was too blind to see them.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 30, 2006
    Can you update please?
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  • From ANON - Mel on August 29, 2006
    Interesting story and characters :) please continue!
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  • From ANON - Christy on August 16, 2006
    Wow. I'm very impressed with both of your stories.
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  • From prairiefire on August 15, 2006
    I also forgot to say I love The Dog. He's awesome. I was wondering what would happen if a Predator crossed paths with a bounty hunter.
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  • From prairiefire on August 15, 2006
    OK, this is too good. You must update. Soon. You can not leave us hanging for another day.
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  • From ANON - caz on August 14, 2006
    hahaha, that was fun, ZAP pop the tires... i wish i could do that from afar when I see wanker drivers or almost get hit by some jerkoff while i'm biking...

    Heeno deserves a royal bitchslapping.
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  • From ANON - shortest_warrior on August 14, 2006
    Top chapter. I hope Tan'ock can convince Chonie to go with him because I think deep down she likes him. I hope Heeno gets what's comin' to him. I hope the Young bloods find the bad guys die hideout in time. Need more Please.
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