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Reviews for River Rapids

By : jemstone5
  • From karmaxp on September 26, 2006
    so you are writing the next chapter as I type right? Great chapter I love it
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  • From ANON - Symetrical break on September 22, 2006
    Great story. Feel free to update
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  • From ANON - shortest_warrior on September 21, 2006
    Another great chapter Jemstone. Girls saved, hero definintely got his girl. I thought it was wonderful how Ver'On supported Chonie, such a gentleman.

    Don't worry about people pestering you about when the babies are going to arrive. I know I did but.. I also know that they have a habit of arriving when they're ready; whether it be late or early from personal experience. But just the same I can't wait to read about them.
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  • From Edison on September 21, 2006
    I am glad he is dead and will not hurt anyone anymore. Will Chonie forgive Tan for his actions. She seemed to like them at the start. I hope she does. When is El going to have the babies? Great stuff!
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  • From ANON - Prairiefire on September 20, 2006
    A death entirely too quick for Heeno, but I guess we couldn't risk Tan's honor for the lowly worm.

    I wonder if Chonie will be able to forgive Tan. Poor guy can't control himself.

    And where are those BABIES!!!! Quit teasing.
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  • From Mitresslove on September 20, 2006
    That was GREAT!!! We are so glad that Tan killed that bastard and afterwards Oh Boy!! Keep it up We want to know if El has her babies nad what becomes of Tan and Chonie.
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  • From karmaxp on September 15, 2006
    Heeno the Human will die at the hands of Tan'ock the Predator I have a feeling. This is GREAT please more!
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  • From ANON - Prairiefire on September 15, 2006
    I agree with Heeno's chances of survival. How is he gonna die? You must update soon.
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  • From Parts on September 14, 2006
    Heeno is in some serious trouble and I do not like his chances for survival. Please bring on the next chapter
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  • From Airporter on September 14, 2006
    I am so glad he will be NO MORE !!! Great Chapters!!I had to read from 9-11 :)
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  • From Verbatim on September 14, 2006
    I have been reading this for a sometime and I like everything about it. I can not wait for you to update.I will be watching for it.
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  • From ANON - caz on September 12, 2006
    OH! don't leave us there! DAMN!
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  • From Mitresslove on September 12, 2006
    Grab your knives and pitchforks, and let's get it on.
    btw You got off lightly with that Lorna calling Heeno a pred. She sent me an email one time with names in it that were not from my or any story on this board. Just to let you know! Great story!
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  • From ANON - scar's lady13 on September 11, 2006
    I can't wait to read more, please hurry!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - shortest_warrior on September 11, 2006
    Damn that Heeno. I hope he dies a painful death. I hope Ver'On will let the girls go with them. Please jemstone.
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