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  • From ANON - blisblop on July 01, 2006
    How bizzare.I like it.Women sure are strong.
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  • From ANON - SyJen on June 26, 2006
    If Jason helped her then he is a monster. She has this all thought out and like everyone else I wnat to read the battle of the Queens. Redd better get back to his honey before the brothers sample her. Awesome stuff love the info.
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  • From ANON - Piano manner on June 23, 2006
    You se animals are very intelligent. She will all the resources of the soft skins for her clan. I can't wait to see what Jason has to do with this. Damn Jean was sparred by the Queen. I want you to teach those brothers a lesson they can't touch Redd's Leanna it ain't natural. I need some more and keep drinking that coffee and I don't think this will be posted into oblivion and if it is I'll still read it. Excellent chappie
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  • From ANON - Hornet on June 23, 2006
    Oh yeah she's plotting stuff and with back up plans I mean the droids can watch the place while sh's gone. She's going to be a Monster whent hat egg laying organ dries. LOOK OUT! Is Jason helping and What are you going to do to the Two brothers? I hope Redd destroys them for trying to touch Leanna. MORE!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Rhayn on June 23, 2006
    She is a thinker isn't she. Keeping the females to breed and making the human males do all the work to defend the clan or I think so. I know you are going to write the Queen's battling don't even have to ask and is Jason working for the man or what. I hope Redd gets back to Leanna. I am hooked love the Queen being all powerful and stuff keep it up! Great work
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  • From ANON - whatever on June 23, 2006
    Hey keep drinking that coffee I find this tale of yours very good and WOW. This Queen is covering everything and if she goes to war with the other Queen I know you are going to write about it and I can't wait. Jean was lucky i hope Redd comes back and put these two brothers in their place. Awesome chapter loved the info keep it coming.
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  • From ANON - SafeHaven on June 23, 2006
    MAn she's got this all planned out is Jason helping for other reasons. Did he give her the robot? The two brothers are going to cause trouble aren't they. Leanna better run I hope Redd returns but I bet he'sgoing back to the compound with the others. Leanna is in danger. If you have the Queens fight DUDE I am all over that. Keep going. Jean was lucky this time.
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  • From ANON - zic on June 23, 2006
    again you surprise me... the queen is more intelligent than i thought, concerning the two aliens.. looks like some one got too adicted to human females... concerning the drones... sicne they are not warriors.. they only serve has workers but still they are deadly... lacking sexual organs and a mind of their own,they are just like... the human robots, obeying the queen.. but the warriors are the ones the have a mind of their own... and by the looks of it those two aliens are very excited with the discovering of a non guarded human female... while the others are guarded by the drones, orders of the queen.. and their plaything "jean" was taken away from them... they are realy excited... of course this is bad for this Womam, Jean, because when the queen allows the brothers to have their "toy" again.... i am certain thay they will not let her escape... in fact they will be very, but, very close to her.... look at the bright side Jean..at least you will be treated like royalty.... in the point of view of the alien that is....
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  • From ANON - zic on June 20, 2006
    Aliens have the ability to evolve in order to survive, and i think the queen might be very inteligent in her aproach, if the aliens reproduce with human females the alien colony not only will grow faster, but also be able to adapt more... in a certain twisted way it is a symbiosis.... the aliens reproduce with the human females, in order to create hybrids "like redd" since this aliens have sexual organs, while the human females, will receive "protection" from other threats, and if the alien queen is able to comunicate with humans she will be realy interested in techonology.. since their mortal enemy is the predator.

    concerning the human males... i can clearly say that some of them are going to die.
    the idea of the queen also relieves the tension in the hive and his less likely to occur batles to see who his the dominat male to reproduce with the queen, not to mention that humans females in the alien point of view.. must be now a rare delicacy.... from what i could see only the strongests aliens " warriors" are able to have a humam female.
    also the queen might also benefit, having human female to serve has "spies" in order for her to know if there might be a riot... and since they are human females they do not represent a threat to her power, not to mention that humas can produce their own food, such has the animasl of the planet, there must be som that the humans could tame.. in order to have a infinite source of food, catle perhaps.... yes, this alien queen realy did her homework.
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  • From ANON - Rhayn on June 10, 2006
    That is something you dont see everyday. Human and alien chatting about stuff. What do the Aliens want with the humans if not as hosts. Jean is going to have fun EWWWW. Redd is having fun with the Queen's approval. WHere is Jason? Isn't he going to save everyone? Well go ahead and write more
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  • From ANON - Blueviper on June 10, 2006
    I don't care what you were drinking either LOL I want you to continue with this strange tale that I like to read whne you post.
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  • From ANON - Bluflame on June 10, 2006
    You are going to continue your story right I am asking nicely here. I don't care what you are drinking I like it LOL. I even like Redd. Please find Jason okay. Later
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  • From ANON - Piano manner on June 07, 2006
    Okay if they are not using the people as host what are they using them for? I think Jean will find out LOL. Where is JAson he better not be dead cause Dude..... Redd is handling his business LOL The Queen I hope she rips Harold in half. But he is a monster so he will think of something. I am anxious to know what.
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  • From ANON - The_Malestrom on June 07, 2006
    Hornet you are not a lazy reader.
    whatever Coffee
    SafeHaven I know it will be posted over into oblivion LOL. I'll fix it when no one is looking
    Thanks for reviewing guys.
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  • From ANON - SyJen on June 07, 2006
    Okay you got some wierd thing going on with the chapters better change that and put this back on top so it can be posted over into oblivion. Lol Where is JAson? He better not be dead. I wonder if he will still want Leanna after what Redd does to her . How can he measure up LOL. I hope Harold gets bit or something he is such an a-hole. What oh what are the two brohters going ot do with JEan? Hey keep going I am listening.
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