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  • From ANON - Blueviper on July 19, 2006
    I LOVE YOUR MONSTER. You again make me say what! See you can't trust even a machine,I see why she wants them around thye can detect things like heat signatures. I wonder how it would fair against a predator. Now I know Momma gonna go kick some ass once they beat hte hell out of the scout. Awesome stuff. I can't wait to see what you do next.
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  • From ANON - Spider on July 17, 2006
    I THOUGHT THAT JASON was the MONSTER. DAMN robots did this . I must know now. LOved the fighting and I know The Queen is going to get that Bitch when the egg laying organ is dry. I can't wait.LOVE THIS!!!
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  • From ANON - Blufame on July 15, 2006
    I too love this story and am not afraid to say it I love all your storie you are an awesome writer now I need to see what Harold will do and what the Queen is planning when the robots are complete keep going with this MONSTER.
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  • From ANON - whatever on July 13, 2006
    French roast or Columbian bean I don't care which keep drinking it. This is Awesome and I am not afraid to say that I LOVE IT. It is like curling up with a good book.
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  • From ANON - Hornet on July 12, 2006
    You went all out Alien keep away was Magnificent!!!! Dude the lovin was like OHHHHHHH!!!! Redd handling bitness LOL.
    Those two brother got the crap beat out of them but Ithink they will cause more harm since they are free thinkers like Redd. I am looking forwards to more get on it! Hornet Laxy reader
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  • From ANON - Lorna on July 08, 2006
    THAT WAS AO AWESOME I WANT MORE FROM YOU PLEASE KEEP THE CHAPTERS COMING. I LOVED IT!!!
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  • From ANON - Leedar on July 07, 2006
    Wow keep this going for 40 more chappies Okay I really love this story.
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  • From ANON - Jacobs on July 07, 2006
    I love what you have done here. This is a totally awesomist,( my word) greatest alien story I have ever read. Malie as others like to call you, this is a fav of mine which means you have to keep going and going. Alien keep away was specatcular keep it up!!!
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  • From ANON - SyJen on July 06, 2006
    THAT WAS AWESOME!!! I mean everything!!! You got to keep it going Malie. I know alot of people read this because its great and keep up with the coffee. Is it French roast LOL
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  • From ANON - Spider on July 06, 2006
    Will a predator be making his way to the planet? Spider
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  • From ANON - Spider on July 06, 2006
    Awesome stuff. I love this trully!! This Queen and Redd are spectacular characters. I love Leanna and Redd strange but true. I can wait for more DUDE. This is great!
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  • From ANON - Cherry on July 06, 2006
    i really really like this story! i hope you keep writing more. the pairing between Redd and Leanna is very interesting but in a good way. keep up the writing, lots of people read it but are just to lazy to review...like me, so good job!
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  • From ANON - Kraven on July 05, 2006
    ALIEN KEEP AWAY SWEEEETTTTTT!!!! I cracked up that was so sweet. THose tow brothers got the snot stomped out of them after Redd took care of Leanna ( Man stlye) LOL. The Queen knows her son she knew a beating was going to happen she wanted the males to see it and be amazed at the power of Redd and they were afraid. She is not stupid. Keep drinking that coffee Malie
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  • From ANON - Kraven on July 02, 2006
    This is a totally thought out stroy girlie and I applaud you and ask for more of this wierd , well written story that I like!
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  • From ANON - Leedar on July 02, 2006
    I am so shocked that I like this as much as I do. It's weird and cool all at the same time do more!!!
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