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Reviews for Tremulous and Tender

By : NataliaV
  • From ANON - angelgirl on November 30, -0001
    Awww! I'm glad Christine is not so mad at him anymore. I wish he were naked in the coffin for that would be a sight for Christine! Lol. Update soon please!
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  • From ANON - Rileywolf133 on November 30, -0001
    Bravo! I started reading when you posted this, but I hadn't reviewed. I have realized that it is too good not to review. :)

    So...you are looking for a beta, ne? I am not like an English teacher, but I spell very well and I know a few things about gram
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  • From ANON - Yumi on November 30, -0001
    Wow!
    I love the viewpoint used in this story. The first chapter, despite not being beta'd, is VERY well written - in fact, better written than some stories that actually had betas, lol.
    If you need someone to beta the story I may be able to help...mayb
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  • From ANON - Kristine on November 30, -0001
    A nice twist on the story!! Though, I'm sorry to admit, when I first read the line about there being a coffin...I laughed. Sorry, but the image struck me as rather funny...Of course, when you next wrote him as naked, all those laughing thoughts flew ou
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  • From angedelamusique on November 30, -0001
    oh, I like it! I can't wait to read more. I like how you write in a 3rd person omnipotent view. That's awesome. It's totally awesome, even without the beta, so you learned well from however your beta is. Good job!

    Angel Marie
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