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Reviews for The End Justifies the Means

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  • From ANON - anony on May 28, 2005
    Oh plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz more!
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  • From ANON - patchjrt on May 27, 2005
    I cannot find the words to describe how amazing this piece of work is--unbelievable. I just finished reading your wonderful 'saga' of stories and I registered on this site JUST so I could tell you how awesome these stories are. They are truly breathtaking-->so tastefully erotic! I completely enjoy the dark side of Anakin--no pun intended. I am just going to stop because I tend to blab on and gush over stories I love. I hope you continue to write more star wars fics *hint hint* Thank you for these amazing stories!!
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  • From ANON - Rain on May 25, 2005
    I wish, wish, wish you could have written the Anakin/Padme scenes in AotC and RotS. It would have been so much better. Actual chemistry. Actual passion.

    I sure hope your write more now that the newest film has come out.
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  • From ANON - OrchidChaos on May 22, 2005
    I can't tell you how much I love your work. The way you portray their temepstuous relationship... It's mindboggling perfect. I love angsty/obssession.

    I loved the whole series. I hope you write more. I know that Anakin and Padme's time is over, but don't let this be the End!
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  • From ANON - carolyn on May 21, 2005
    A wonderful read, through and through. Very well written, what with the in-depth explorations of each moment and Anakin's reasoning. I feel almost sorry for him, seeing as how his natal circumstances are majorly skewing up his thoughts and motives. Somehow though, it still does not justify the coercion. "No matter how hard you try not to, you will lose her.” -a very appropriate quote. It is the bittersweet ending I love the most. Although, is the last chapter supposed to only comprise of a Shakespearan quote? The rest of the chapter isn't showing up.
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  • From ANON - Asai Kaiyosho on April 27, 2005
    I absolutely LOVE what you write!! You have the characters down so good that you have given me such insight into their personalities I could never have even hoped to comprehend on my own with what little time I have nowadays. My friend Tasha was the one who sent me the link to your stories, I have to say they are by far the best AFF's I have read (even though I don't read many) and will remain so for a long time, I am sure. I love your stuff!! Keep it coming!! Give us aspiring writers some good examples to go by and fuel our burning passion with your beautiful words! xD
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  • From ANON - Tasha on April 27, 2005
    I bothered my friend to read these and was rewarded into getting him to not only read them but to love them as I do! I hope that you are doing ok and that life is treating you good. Have a good week and again, I love your stories and style. You are the best writer on here by far.
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  • From ANON - Tasha on September 25, 2004
    Hi! I am so sorry it has taken me so long to answer your email and review this story. Life decided to go silly for abit but for now it has settled down and I finally have the chance to let you know that I loved this story as much, if not more, then the first one. It really is amazing how well you write and I can not stress enough to you how much I think that you have done a damn good job. Like I said before I have never been a Star Wars fan...at all...but believe it or not your stories changed my mind on it, made me want to actually watch the movies and read some of the books. You are the best writer on this site and I think there are some reallyenteented writers here, but your work outshines them. Thank you again for emailing me and I hope that you are able to continue to write as much as you want....I am looking forward to seeing anything you post. Great job and thanks again for taking out the time to talk back.
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  • From ANON - amniarix on September 06, 2004
    Wow, the relentless descent of one man into darkness, with lots of smut thrown in. Whats not to like? This will be an interesting task for the third movie to show Anakins fall to becoming Vadar without getting too dark. (I mean it will have to retain its pg rating) still, however Geoge L. chooses to show it, in my heart I shall keep the explanation shown in your fic as being the 'real' version of events. Great work!
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  • From on June 11, 2004
    This one is even better than "Succumb." One of the most erotic stories I have ever read ... I couldn't get enough. I think KellyB giv given me a deeper understanding of Anakin's true character in this story than in most of the "official" stories. I lost myself in this one - a tough thing for a writer to do but KellyB has pulled it off. I was able to focus on what was happening in the story rather than thinking "Anakin wouldn't ..." or "Padme doesn't ..." or feeling that the situation was unlikely. The very best I have read in a LONG time - thank you so so much.
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  • From pensfan100 on February 10, 2004
    Do you ever write anything that sucks? This, like all the others you've written, surpasses anything I've ever read in Star Wars fan fiction! Such emotion, such passion, such depth! The way you paint with words! You are the Da Vinci of the written word! Hats off to you!!! You should win every fan fiction award out there!
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  • From ANON - gx-Silver on July 28, 2003
    HOT, HOT, HOT! DAMN, HOT. The writing is superb and the lemons are outrageously well written. I need a cold shower just from the chapters. Great story. ^_~
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  • From ANON - Blue on July 16, 2003
    Just as incredible as when I read Succumb. Excellent writing. Anakin seem to be less of a jerk after I read this...it's so tragic that their story would have such a sad ending. Excellent!
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  • From ANON - LadyM on July 15, 2003
    Incredible! It seemed like ages ago that I read, "Succomb" and I thought that I was going to die waiting for the POV of Anikan. Been checking on a number of different sites and actually had given up hope. Yesturday I had stumbled across "The End Justifies the Means" and WOW! I've been reading it in incriments because my brain could take only so much. I guess I liked savoring your stories. It is extremely erotic but in very good taste.

    Anikan's POV of the confused, intense, and troubled youth came out clearly in your story. Aside from all his boyish jealousies, possesivenss, and anguish, he was still fighting "the voice" that was slipping him into darkness. Of course, his love affair with Padme was delaying the inevitable. Your insightfulness is right on the money. Sometimes I did get confused as tore yre you were at in the story with each chapter because Succomb was much more faithful to the movie time line. Anyways, once I figured out where you were it was ok. Anikan's boyish conquest's over Padme were almost cute!

    If I had to give you a grade it would be A+++++. Keep up the excellent work and keep writing. PLEASE!
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  • From ANON - Rose-Arwen-Padme on June 20, 2003
    God. You're brillant. I have never felt my heart pump faster by READING something ever before, even when I first read Succumb on Fanfiction.net. And this really soothed me too. After Succumb, which was magnifecient, I felt a little weary of Anakin, that maybe it was ONLY lust driving him to conquest over Padme. Damn, did you prove me wrong! And thank goodness you did. I'm... I'm... I'm speechless, that's what I am. Who knows how many times I will come back to both of your stories to read them over and over again. Ya know, I couldn't even spell correctly after I read this? I was writing some list and I kept messing up. Beautiful, passionate, dangerous...
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