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By : Middernacht
  • From NicolinaN on March 20, 2007
    This was good stuff. Well written, thoughtful, in character. Do you plan on adding more chapters?

    Nic.
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  • From ANON - sodapop0006 on August 31, 2006
    Whoa, I really like this one! :D You've got a good background for Jack and didn't cut the dark part from Riddick's character at all. Nice job, please keep it going!
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  • From ANON - ratatosk on August 02, 2006
    Beautiful start. Really nailed the characters.
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  • From ANON - bluecatdevil on February 05, 2006
    Loved your beginning.
    I love Riddick and Jack stories so much especially when written just after escaping the planet.
    I like how you have Jack and Riddick trying to figure each other out it's so
    bittersweet and romantic in an odd sort of way!!
    Please update soon.
    Cheers, blue.
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  • From evilgrin on February 01, 2006
    oh, pleasepleaseplease tell me you're going to keep going with this?
    I love seeing a writer deal with his ambiguities, rather than just make him a nutcase killer...
    looking forward to more
    xxxevilgrinxxx
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  • From ANON - redplanet on January 31, 2006
    Gripping. Excellent. Perfectly in character. I am on the edge of my seat for the next chapter.
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  • From bima140277 on January 29, 2006
    Oh I like this first chapter.

    more please soon


    (don't forget to put a disclaimer in the first chapter)
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  • From ANON - S on January 28, 2006
    Wow...I really liked this....i hope you post more of it real soon!

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