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Reviews for The Blood Remembers

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  • From ANON - Ambroais on November 25, 2014
    ...more?
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  • From Safir84 on December 18, 2009
    Great story you’ve got here, I really like it! The plot’s great and the character portrayal’s too, as well as the character interaction, especially Selene/Michael and everything’s pretty well written too, of course! One thing that bugged me; was the “sex scene” in the first chapter, it was way too short and not nearly as descriptive as I would have liked, oh well….other than that everything was fine! You’ve probably abandoned this story by now, but if you ever decide to continue, please write more ASAP, because I’d love to read more!



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  • From asofterdarkness on February 25, 2009
    The first decent Underworld Selene/Michael fic I've read, so great job! NOW UPDATE! argh.
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  • From ANON - anonymous on January 13, 2007
    Hi,
    this is a really great fanfic - so far one of the best I've ever read. It is exiting, and you would want to know or read more of this fanfic with the Selene/Michael relationship. But alas, it has not been updated since january 2006. Will the story ever get updated???
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  • From ANON - DarkFire on November 26, 2006
    You need to update this. Is geeat. I have hope to read more in a near future. ;P

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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on June 26, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on June 18, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 05, 2006
    this is good, keep goimg
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  • From ANON - Nequi on February 01, 2006
    OMG.....I think this fic is awsum! I mean, I'm reading this fic off of my Sidekick!!! Bc my computer won't work.....but I REALLY like this fic!!!! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Eva on January 29, 2006
    Keep updating
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  • From Suggestion on January 25, 2006
    Ch.1 The Blood Remembers (I figured this would be a good way to keep you form getting confused about which review goes with which chapter.)

    Nice first chapter.I think it could use a little more detail here and there, but that's all (Aside from the whole "Death Eater" really being "Death Dealer" thing, but I can see other reviewers already told you about that). I think this has the makings of a really good story, I'm looking forward to the next chapter, and please don't take my critiques as flames. I only mean them in a helpful way.
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  • From ANON - Skittles on January 24, 2006
    theres only one irk i have with this story. They are Death Dealers, not Death Eaters ;)
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  • From ANON - Scott on January 24, 2006
    Alright, the main part of the story is very good. I need to say that, but before I hand out any more compliments, you have to add a couple more chapters. Also, you ended that chapter kind of abruptly. You had gone into detail for the rest of the chapter, but then it just stopped in one sentence. Describe it just a little more.
    Cheers,

    Scott
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  • From ANON - mshc81 on January 24, 2006
    love the story!! next chapter please!! =)
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  • From ANON - Duchess on January 23, 2006
    While the basis of the story is good and the plot is sound, there are some nagging little details that make the story sound as though you wrote it for another fan base. For instance, in your summary, you call it "Everworld" instead of "Underworld" as it should be. Also, Selene was not a 'death eater' (that's from Harry Potter); she was a 'death dealer.'

    Don't think of this as a flame, because I did enjoy the general story. However, it's the little details that really make a story and some of yours are distracting.
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