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By : ElfNight
  • From fairietayle on February 23, 2009
    Chapter 4.
    The fight-scene was well built up. It started out small with line soldiers challenging their higher ups, and then after that was Vaakos fight.
    The personal watch dog -bit was amusing, but I have a feeling he will pose a problem later on :)

    AH-HAH! And the title of the story is revealed! Nicely done ^-^
    Riddick always gets what he wants. And poor Vaako. Everything will be alright in the end, I'm sure the authoress will make sure of it ;)

    Still unable to quit reading,
    Fairietayle
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  • From fairietayle on February 23, 2009
    Chapter 3 - I still adore the hellhound :) I just would like to put a name to the face, so to speak ;)

    It's amusing how easily Riddick is pulling Vaako on a leash. Riddick is just that kind of a guy, he takes what he wants and doesn't ask questions, and if others don't like it then tough luck. Vaakos non-existant resistant I'm blaming on the purifying chamber ^-^

    Unable to keep herself in check and moving on,
    Fairietayle
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  • From fairietayle on February 23, 2009
    Once again, I love the flow :)

    You showed Wulia's cunningness and her true colours neatly and believably and then put her neatly in her place and out of the way ^-^
    I loved what you did to her, because there ARE worse things than dying and that is Wulia's weak spot ;D

    And the way Riddick named the new first of commanders and the leader advisor... brilliant! ;)

    I'm also glad you haven't forgotten the visits in the purifying chamber and show that in the ways it affects Cylus (did I spell it correctly this time? it's hard to remember where the y goes x) )

    The Hellhound scene. I LOVE and ADORE it :D (I want a throne room full of Hellhounds too!! >_
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  • From fairietayle on February 23, 2009
    Hi ^-^
    I have to admit, I have already read "Right Hand" last night. After I read it, I had to register and leave you a comment ;D
    First I thought that I would just leave you a message where I said everything I loved about the story, but then I decided that I would propably forget to mention something important and decided to rewiev each chapter separately - arent you lucky? ;D
    I'll just take my time reading it this time, and savor it, so my comments will come when they come xD

    So, On this first chapter I immediately noticed the flow of things. You write smoothly, for example when Wulia and Culys were speaking and Culys's thought wandered, you brought him back to Wulia's screeching gently, like when that happens in real life; you start to think something and then you notice you've missed something the other one has said and continued from there - you didn't start explaining what happened in the mean time.
    That also explains the relationship the Vaakos have - You kept the characters in character and made them real. And I loved the conversation between them - it was exactly like I imagined it would be :)
    I also liked Culys's feelings, the terror in the beginning, the thought that he wouldn't be forgiven his sins - because that made him human. And then the purifying chamber visits. How that made him so numb to Wulia that he saw right through her and had the spine to stick up to himself - even though in the end Wulia got her way, as always ;)
    Then there's Vaakos no desire to be leader, and his simple and unwawering thoughts on how a leader should be.
    ...You just built the characters so beautifully from the start :D

    And the Hellhounds :D :D
    I was sad that they didn't show them much in the movie and I missed them, and I just knew I would see them in your story from the one sentence you wrote - and it made me insanely happy ^-^

    I have no idea if you really understood anything from my babbling, but I'll try to be more coherent in the future ;D

    With happy warm fuzzy feelings,
    Fairietayle
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  • From Scorpio71 on February 14, 2009
    This story was wonderful; at turns touching, steamy hot, and exciting. Love the drama with Wulia, Garen is a hoot, and the Hellhounds were delightfully fun. Would love to see more in this AU, Riddick is going to be such a force for change in a positive way. Still, positive or not, change inevitably leads to chaos. *grins* Plus the whole Riddick/Vaako ship is super hot!
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  • From Extraho on September 29, 2008
    *hollers with laughter* bloody figures that the only thing that can make Riddick moan in pain is to be called by his given name. *chuckles* i love the story. very well written and i do adore the naive Vaako!
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  • From LunaRiddle on October 02, 2007
    Oh soo perfect! I can't even though of saying anything else about the story! It's 150% perfect!
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  • From Aresy on June 30, 2007
    ^_^ WOW, i really enjoyed this! Thank you for this awesome fic!!! Can't get enough of these two! Vaako has always been my favorite, and this pairing rocks. You did a great job with the descriptions and the overall plot was interesting. Please write more, I know i would read it.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 10, 2007
    really hot. keep it going....for vaako(karlurban) fans, go to urbanreveries.net, there you will find more delicious fiction on him, this story is among the many on the site.
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  • From ANON - Jadeite on January 08, 2007
    Wooohooooo! That was fantabulous, thank you.
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  • From ANON - merit on January 04, 2007
    Hi!
    I saw Riddick two day´s agon on Tv (germany) And the thought of a Vaako/Riddick stroy just bit me.
    I found your awesome story and just couldn´t stop reading^^ It so cute in the end ;-)
    one of the best writen fictions of any fandom I ever read. The characters are so authentic and the story is just great.
    I really hope you´ll write another one or a few short sequels to this on^^
    just great!!

    Merit
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  • From ANON - Genna on December 31, 2006
    I have checked back and forth on this story. It was worth the wait. Good Job Mouse.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 22, 2006
    WTF!!!i love this story./girly squeals/
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  • From ANON - Krystal on December 22, 2006
    AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! So good by y end??!!??!!??!! ILOVE this fic! So good i wish it'd never end. Can we atleast have one more short side story with more smut? PLEASE! *puppy eyes xinfinity*
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  • From ANON - cimmer on December 21, 2006
    I thought the ending was sweet and a believable sweet considering it's Riddick but I want to find out what happens to the secondary characters like Garen and Breezy. Thanks for the fun read.
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