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Reviews for Worlds Colliding All Time Love Vader/Padme

By : MsJoaquin
  • From colonelcarter on April 10, 2008
    i love this story i hope you will some day get a new chapter up
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  • From heartagram on May 24, 2007
    great story! please update!
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  • From heartagram on May 24, 2007
    oh,God! the part when they tell Padme Leia died...my heart broke!
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  • From ANON - Diz on February 15, 2006
    The idea is interesting, but your format makes the story very difficult to read. There is almost no punctuation, no paragraphs, and no description. All of the quotes just kind of run together. If you are trying for a surreal or poetic style, it doesn't work (in my opinion). And the quotes are too random and unconnected, with no scenes or settings, to make a good straightforward story.

    I'm not flaming you, just being honest. The plot sounds interesting, but there is no story to tie all these quotes together.
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  • From ANON - London on January 13, 2006
    Frankly, I'm surprised that you've received good reviews for this story. Nothing is described in very much detail. This story is pretty much all dialogue. Also, the way it is written is a little confusing. As for the plot? It's been done.
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  • From ANON - jeannie on January 13, 2006
    not bad... write more
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  • From ANON - LaPapillion on January 12, 2006
    This is an truly intriguing FF. Glad I stumbled upon it. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Dru on January 11, 2006
    FOR SITH'S SAKE. COULD YOU PLEASE CHANGE YOUR SUMMARY FROM ALL CAPS SO YOU AREN'T SHOUTING AT EVERYONE?!?!?!?!?!
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