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Reviews for Harbinger

By : prophecygirl
  • From on January 15, 2006
    Another great chapter.

    So, Luke is attracted to Preitha -- like father, like son. She has quite the affect on the Skywalker boys.

    In Preitha, I think you've created a character to be admired. She is intelligent and so far has demonstrated a lot of character in the face of some very daunting situations.
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  • From ANON - JayCee on January 15, 2006
    That was nice of Luke...

    But I wonder if it just made things worse. I don't trust Palps when he's this nice...
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  • From ANON - me on January 14, 2006
    Oh please don't make her turn into a rebel. It will kill the whole story for me.
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  • From ANON - JayCee on January 11, 2006
    Luke really is a bad liar... but that's because he's so darn cute.

    So are they going to leave her to go on her way? Update soon would nice... ;-)
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  • From ANON - Prophecy Girl on January 11, 2006
    Thank you to everyone, Busanda and JayCee and anyone I may have forgotten, for the continued support. I'm so pleased that people are enjoying this story.

    I had a lot of fun writing this section (ch. 8). I've never been a big fan of Luke or Leia, but I have to admit that writing them is a blast. The dialogue just kind of... flows.

    Thanks again everybody. :)
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  • From on January 11, 2006
    Leave it to Han to lighten the atmosphere. The dialogue in this chapter was very well done, and you had me laughing in spots. This is developing into a really great story. I'll look forward to another chapter soon.
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  • From ANON - JayCee on January 08, 2006
    Now that I didn't see coming...
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  • From on January 08, 2006
    A new chapter! Yay!

    So, Preitha's not only been captured by the Rebels, but by Luke Skywalker himself. Interesting. This just keeps getting better and better.

    I'm looking forward to more.
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  • From on January 08, 2006
    This story is wonderful. It is very well-written, and you've integrated it into the canon story seamlessly. I am enjoying it very much. Thank you.
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  • From ANON - iamwickedcool on January 07, 2006
    good show girl------please up date soon
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  • From ANON - JayCee on January 04, 2006
    Of course the rebels are gonna win... :-p

    That's no way for Motti to treat his little girl, but oh well, nothing they can do about that now.
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  • From ANON - me on January 04, 2006
    Oh God I am so glad she did not die.
    I was scared for a moment but how awful for her to watch as her father dies.
    I hope you update this one soon.
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  • From ANON - Dar on January 03, 2006
    I really enjoyed this story. You made my Monday! I can't wait to read more. Please update soon!!!!
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  • From Schmootika on January 03, 2006
    I love this story!! The fact that you took a character that is not as well known to base your OC from is a stroke of brilliance. Also I like how you wove the story around canon. Keep on and I look forward to the next installment.
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  • From ANON - JayCee on January 03, 2006
    I usually don't care much for Vader or Anakin fics, but this one is pretty good.

    I like the setting and the OC is different (in a good way).

    I'm interested in where this goes.
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