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Reviews for Two of a Kind

By : allia
  • From KittyClaws on August 23, 2009
    oooooh.

    Nice twist. But a little too domestic for Jack. I don't think she'd do something like that... getting married? Nah. Maybe having a boyfriend like that but not married.

    I'm not entirely sure that you should keep the baby around in the story. It doesn't tie in. What is Riddick going to play Daddy? It doesn't fit.

    I like your story but it's too domestic in the child area. Other than that a good play out of the characters.
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  • From carolinaveggie on April 23, 2007
    I really like reading these chapters and I love the last comment Jack made to Riddick.
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  • From ANON - Silentviolin on November 20, 2006
    Hehe....more? nya?
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  • From ANON - emma-bug on June 28, 2006
    love it love it write more pleaseeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!

    with love emma-bug
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  • From ANON - Rose on January 30, 2006
    Wow, this is really good. Please update soon. Later...
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  • From ANON - moonlove on December 18, 2005
    *kneeling on floor, with folded hands* MORE PLEASE; I can not wait any longer!!!
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  • From ANON - ASH on December 16, 2005
    UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From bima140277 on December 12, 2005
    more more more please
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  • From ANON - hope on December 11, 2005
    I'm hooked please finish it! what happens between Jack and Riddick now that she's knocked up?

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  • From ANON - atrixa on December 11, 2005
    really really need more!
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  • From ANON - keyonnamc on December 08, 2005
    How in the hell is Jack pregnant? Don't answer that I know how. Who knocked her up? What happens now? Update soon...
    ...(Y)
    .(^_^)
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