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Reviews for "One Night" Series

By : DMSandArica
  • From ANON - Rian Sage on January 07, 2006
    Again, your progression was done very well. This seemed sweet, but not quite as much emotion. It seems they're getting more comfortable with the idea. I'm wondering if your mention of non-exclusiveness was for dialog purposes or a precursor to later things...jealousy being one of them. I only wish that other site was working...the lengthy discussion over 'Coruscant' was very interesting. Can't wait for 'One Night on the Jade's Fire.' Somehow I think emotion will be on the rise again once they realize what they've gotten themselves into.
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  • From ANON - Luke's Hand on January 06, 2006
    I like the situation, but the first chapter was a bit too cold and technical to be genuinely erotic, with too specific description of what went where, and not really enough emotion or rhythm of language. It might be 'only sex' but it can still be passionate and sensual.
    I hope you take that constructively, because youre not a bad writer at all, I just think you need to work on your style and tone. Perhaps the next chapters are sexier.
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  • From ANON - missredkat on December 13, 2005
    Update!! Please... no really. I love this. It's wonderful, and hot and sexy and wow. Just make Luke beg.. After that last chapter, he needs to beg.
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  • From ANON - maevenly on December 09, 2005
    WHOOOHOOOO!!! That was wonderful, erotic, amazing and it made me want to reach for my vibrator!
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  • From ANON - DMS on November 29, 2005
    Oh, Luke really needs to dump the bodysnatcher and get to some more bootknocking with Mara!!! Excellent story! Very hot, hot, hot!!!
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  • From ANON - Myn Donos on November 28, 2005
    I'm Loving what I'm reading however I would love to see Luke break Callie's heart, mostily because I hate her with the passion of a thousand sun's. Also having Mirax was aswome, her and Corran are my favorite, next to Luke and Mara. Hehe it would also be neat to see an apearence of Face/Dia, Myn/Lara, or Wedge/Iella. Please keep up the good work, if I can ever help with a beta it would be my pleasure to do so.
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  • From ANON - Dar on November 27, 2005
    I would love to read more! Excellent!
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  • From ANON - Rian Sage on November 27, 2005
    *Whoa* (fanning self) I really like how you've progressed their attitudes in tune with their sexual behavior in these. The obvious feelings at the end of the third to the turmoil they're in now. I'm glad to see Luke honest with himself and Mara in denial. I find that true to character. I can't wait to see what you have planned for the next one.
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  • From ANON - purebristles on November 21, 2005
    Excellent stuff, and too hot, just too hot...
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  • From ANON - kayladie on November 20, 2005
    Ooh, you already know how much I love this series! And after what you told me might be coming up in the next one, I can't wait to see that one either. *wink*

    I love how Luke and Mara are so raunchy in these tales. It's gotta be nice to just forget you're the Jedi Master and the former Emperor's Hand for a while, hmm?

    The kiss at the end of the Kuat one was wonderful, though, so tender and sweet. Luke and Mara were just destined to fall in love if you ask me, although I like the way they've decided to take advantage of their mutual attraction for a while first in this AU, hehehe!

    More soon!!!
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  • From ANON - DMS on November 17, 2005
    You know I love this series. When are we going to see more? More!!! LOL. Great job!
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  • From ANON - Myn Donos on November 12, 2005
    This is one of the greatest series of Luke and Mara fanfiction I have ever read to date! I was taken away by how well you got their behavior so accurate. I can tell that you've read the book's and I say thank god for that. Their are too many stories over the new movies, or the movies in general. Its very rare for me to find a good Luke and Mara story out there. I've read your three stories multiple times and can't wait for the next. Also I think its great that you've been a Star Wars fan for 28 years now, I've been one since the age of 5, and its stayed with me all the years. Also i've noticed your reading the Dark Nest trilogy, i guessed due to the whole tickle test that was in your second story One Night on Yavin, was in Dark Nest: The Joiner King. I'm interested in hearing your opinion on where the star wars timeline is heading. Please contact me via e-mail (first time i've actually have posted it online because of someones stories).
    P.S. If you recognise my name then I'll be very impressed, and you'll then be my favorite fanfic writer next to Ash Darklighter on FF.net.
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