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Reviews for False Dawn

By : Chriscent
  • From ANON - bebe on January 04, 2006
    this is getting interesting

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  • From ANON - bebe on January 03, 2006
    that was a sad ending for that chapter...it made me feel so bad cuz they couldnt make it...but you wouldnt leave them like that...so its all good
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  • From Demondogs on January 03, 2006
    Is Jack dead? Did you just kill off Jack?
    I can't wait to find out!!!!! PLease update soonish!!!!!!

    ~Demondogs
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  • From ANON - bebe on December 28, 2005
    good work
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  • From ANON - ASH on December 16, 2005
    UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Azreal on December 08, 2005
    Wow! i really like your story, it has a plot line that I am really excited about. Even teh OCC of Riddick is ok I mean he is kinda shocked and there for acting out of charater. I can't wait for teh next chapter.
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  • From ANON - bebe on December 07, 2005
    good...im running out of stuff to say....its good....
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  • From ANON - bebe on November 29, 2005
    cool chappie...
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  • From ANON - bebe on November 23, 2005
    woooo did a good job *cookies 4 u*
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  • From ANON - Chriscent on November 18, 2005
    bebe, you are so right!! I wrote this a while back and now, reading it, I see how out of character he is. My Riddicks now are much harder. I've considering fixing this but it would be a vast undertaking.

    So, forgive me for it being a bit out of character. Jack will make up for it in the end.

    And I still hold to the opinion that Riddick can change, but that it can't be instanteous. Riddick can be NICE!! It just has to be a slow subtle change and I don't think this was. I think it came to fast, too much, and too F*CKING SWEET! So, thank you for your opinion, I *completely* agree with you! :-D

    Chris
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  • From ANON - bebe-RIP eddie on November 18, 2005
    this is such a cool story...only one critique, slow down on the "honey" and "baby" talk. i kindof...dulls his character.....if you get me? but otherwise great job (-:.
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  • From ANON - bebe on November 14, 2005
    oh my gosh no!...poor jack...poor riddick...i felt so bad when i read that... it was a realli good chapter...
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  • From ANON - bebe on November 09, 2005
    omg, noooo....goshness, i hope there isnt alot of angst......that was a good chapter...your actually a good writer.
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  • From ANON - Sandy on November 09, 2005
    More, i need moooore! Pretty please?
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  • From ANON - bebe on November 04, 2005
    that was a really good chapter...
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