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Reviews for False Dawn

By : Chriscent
  • From ANON - Evelynn on January 26, 2006
    YES! Riddick came back! I love the story! Can't wait for the next update!
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  • From ANON - rebel1203 on January 23, 2006
    I love this story. Please update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Eryn on January 23, 2006
    I knew that kid was alive!!!! I'm so glad to see the real Jack back, she's ready to fight and I love it. She'll need Riddick on this though, although how she'll find him I have no idea. Great chapter can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - S on January 23, 2006
    I knew her son was probably alive! great update, gave us all kinds of good stuff!!! please update soon!!
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  • From ANON - S on January 18, 2006
    very nice update!! I'm glad someone still remembers her! now where is riddick? lol
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  • From ANON - Sandy on January 17, 2006
    Oh great googly moogly i do love this fic.
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  • From ANON - S on January 16, 2006
    PLEASE say that riddick comes back into this story and soon! lol i wonder if riddick has been searching for jack or if he will still like her? great update, I cant wait for more!
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  • From ANON - ratatosk on January 16, 2006
    Poor Jack. Poor, Poor, Jack. You've done a wonderful job of drawing the characters in a believable fashion. Especially Jack, so unmoored from any origin, any, place to be. Just doing the best she can under the circumstances.

    I want Riddick to swoop her up, as much as I resist that ending.

    good work.
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  • From ANON - S on January 15, 2006
    I'm glad that she turned Trow down.....great update! please tell me that riddick has been atleast looking for her this whole time!
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  • From ANON - redplanet on January 15, 2006
    I've been lurking since your first chapter, but I just have to say this was a DAMN FINE chapter. Not that the others haven't been, but this was excellent writing. Thanks, and keep it up.
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  • From ANON - S on January 12, 2006
    great update!! i wonder if Trow and Jack are going to get interested in each other? i sure hope that riddick comes back into the picture!!
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  • From ANON - Eryn on January 07, 2006
    oh wow. I wanna kill that bastard! Although I don't think that was really her son, and I doubt she's really free of CI since it seems they did to her what the did to Riddick and now the poor baby is going to be subject to thier experiments too. I really wanna kill that bastard! Riddick had better find out the truth and soon!
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  • From ANON - S on January 05, 2006
    aww the poor baby! i wonder if that damn man did something to her baby, what if that wasnt her baby that had died, what if they still have her baby and its alive?????
    great update, i cant wait to see if Riddick finds her.......update soon!!
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  • From ANON - demondogs on January 05, 2006
    Wow...............That was really sad! Poor Jack! I wonder if Riddick even knew that he had a son or if he knew that Jack was pregnent! I wonder what he'd do when he finds out....if he finds out.....PLEASE update soonish!!!!!!!
    ~Demondogs
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  • From ANON - S on January 05, 2006
    I just read the whole thing...wow this is great, please update soon!!
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