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Reviews for False Dawn

By : Chriscent
  • From ANON - ash on March 12, 2006
    you can update now
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 09, 2006
    This is fucking awesome

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  • From ANON - Dee on February 08, 2006
    I absolutely love this story. As you said, Riddick does seem a little bit soft but I still totaly love this story. I can't wait to hear more from you. Keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - FitMama on February 06, 2006
    Sorry I haven't reviewed sooner, but I love this story. I think the reunion with Jack and Riddick was perfect. I'm glad she didn't delay very long telling him the truth about their son. Can't wait for the next chapter--hope they reconcile some more as they figure out how to get the baby back.
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  • From ANON - lily on February 05, 2006
    Stellar piece of writing as usual from you! Please keep going, I was so happy with the way your last story ended, i'm looking forward to this entire story a lot!!
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  • From ANON - eryn on February 05, 2006
    Don't hate him Jack!!!!! lol - you know your characters are great when people talk to them instead of you lol. Seriously though, this was a really great chapter i could feel the emotions rushing between the two of them. I hope she doesn't end up hating him, he kills himself a little everyday for leaving her there and he really loves her. Only a matter of time before he loves that baby just as much. You know I almost feel sorry for CI cause there won't be much left when these two are done.
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  • From ANON - S on February 04, 2006
    Great update........im glad that she agreed to let riddick sign on with them.....i bet hes gonna be great help!!! i cant wait for more~
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 01, 2006
    *Squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee*
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  • From ANON - lee on February 01, 2006
    that was harsh, when are you gonna have her tell him about the baby?
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  • From ANON - Avidreader on January 31, 2006
    Nooo!!! She can't be mad at him, not now that they found each other again!! Please update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - S on January 31, 2006
    OOOOOH how can she be such a bitch to him???? i think she should tell riddick what she is trying to do, how shes trying to get their son back...i think he would definitly help.....

    wow.....that was a great update! i cant wait to read more!!
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  • From ANON - Rogue212 on January 29, 2006
    Damn! I love this story! Thank you for making Jacks character strong and independent, I can't stand when people make her all weak and stupid. Please update asap. I cant wait.
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  • From Middernacht on January 28, 2006
    Nice.
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  • From ANON - Eryn on January 27, 2006
    Yes He's Back!!!!!! I'll hazard a guess that the two she didn't kill, he did. Now they'll go get thier baby back together!!
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  • From ANON - S on January 26, 2006
    ALRIGHT about damn time Riddick showed up!! I cant wait to see what happenes between jack and riddick!!
    Update real soon!!
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