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By : Raythe
  • From ANON - Chaos Ruler1 on August 21, 2007
    For some reason, this chapter went a whole lot faster that the others. That was probably just my excitement at reading it though. The first time I read your story, it took FOR E VER. I'm serious. I was abnormally slow to read every chapter. I like it, your story. That's why I lingered, I suppose. Un, I like this chapter as well. Sets up a very big catastrophe in my point of view. Is that what's coming up, ne? No, don't answer that. I can wait until the next chapter to find out. Looking forward to the next chapter with ill-diguised excitment!
    ~Chaos Ruler1
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  • From ANON - Esther on August 19, 2007
    HEy there! I as beginning to think that you had abandoned your story!
    Oh well...

    It was a good chapter, so keep it up...and PLEASE don't take so long to update again...PLEASE!???!???!?!?!

    see ya!
    FC
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on August 18, 2007
    Wow, that was most definitely worth the wait! A very emotional, disturbing chapter...the entire group dynamic seems to be changing, and I just hope that it doesn't break before they confront Palpatine (that wormy bastard).

    Now to start ticking off the days til September and the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - reinrose82 on August 18, 2007
    Awesome new chapter! I'm weepy right now, I swear! Dark, yeah, but a good story gets you emotionally
    invested in it and this angsty turn of events has got me hooked (not that I wasn't already LOL). REALLY
    good stuff. Can't wait for more!
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  • From Vampirezdarkgurl on August 18, 2007
    I for the life of me can not find the pesky review button on WWOMB so I'm back here to review. Anyway phew this chapter did have a bit of angst but it was as good as always. And I feel really bad because I didn't review chapter 19 I got a new computer with vista and a lot of the websites were running slow for a while. But that was a really good chapter too. Any way keep up the good work I'm looking forward to chapter 21. :) TTFN.
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  • From Mizzad on July 22, 2007
    more.. please! =)

    HOOT!
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  • From ANON - claire on July 22, 2007
    very hot XD
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  • From ToreadoreRose on July 18, 2007
    Hey there :) I think I read somewhere you're accepting fanarts for your fic so.... *cough* I"m so not an amazing artist but my brain insisted I try something... http://toreadore-rose.livejournal.com/20389.html#cutid1

    I'm not done yet, but I'm really REALLY enjoying your fic. You write very well and I just love the plot as well as the more intimate parts. I was so worried about R2 being taken over!!! heehee, anyway, hope you keep going with this wonderful piece
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  • From Miko on July 15, 2007
    I just wanted to pop in and let you know at first I was on the edge about the paring but the way you write makes it very enjoyable and solid. I love your Vader and can only wondering about his connections with Qui-gon or Leia for that matter? I must say I must have read and re-read this story a dozen times the last few days I have been home sick and I am on pins and needles? I do hope you update really soon for I fear if you dont I might go insane...

    -miko
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  • From windlg84 on July 06, 2007
    Love the story
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  • From ANON - Queen Serenity of the Naboo on June 18, 2007
    You updated! Thank you so much! *glomps*

    Oh man, the images I got from this chapter were oh so sizzling. Luke and Vader are so cute together, and hot as well. ^-^

    Argh, Palpatine is so DISGUSTING!!! Vader will never be his because Vader belongs to Luke and Luke alone! >.
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  • From LadyLaran on June 12, 2007
    Oh my gods! You updated! Fantastic! I can't wait to see what you'll do next. Usually, I avoid incest fics but stumbled onto this one and was drawn in. Excellent writing and ideas. Please continue!
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  • From ANON - reinrose82 on June 07, 2007
    Wow! Well worth the wait. Thank you thank you!
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  • From syndromia on June 07, 2007
    Poor Vader, he can't catch a break! And palpatine is a royal sob. I can't wait for him to bite it. Well, I've got to run, I have to start my summer homework, outline half of my government textbook, start preparing a presentation on it, read 180 more by billy Collins, read the joy luck club and the poisonwood bible, and read/do a research paper on In Cold Blood. Oh well, I've a few hours on a plane to read it, so I'm pretty well set...

    Loved the prison scene, but I'll have to reread it when mom isn't hovering...

    God Bless,
    Syndromia
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on June 07, 2007
    :squeal:

    I am SO glad you updated, and what a damn awesome chapter. Sexy and thrilling and everything I hoped for. I can't wait to see what's going to go down with the force-gang now...and can't wait to see Vader having Luke on the throne, heh.

    That Palpatine is a bastard...
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