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By : Raythe
  • From ANON - Bluumberry on September 16, 2007
    Well this chapter certainly filled my expectations ^^ Qui-Gon's exact feelings are still left in the dark but I have a feeling not for that long.
    Since this unraveling of the "past" of Anakin and Qui-Gon I can't help but ponder upon Luke's reaction to the archive. I hope this will be revealed soon.
    I especially liked how you handled Luke's point of view and how Anakin is dealing with the situation the three of them find themselves in now.
    I had many more things to say but seem to have forgotten them ^^ The writing was of spectacular quality as always and I hope to read more soon! Very addictive
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  • From ANON - answers on September 15, 2007
    so would not care if qui gon died. he seems to be cracking on to vader even though luke loves him so much, not even regretful about it. the audacity!

    i love luke, he was all fragile and childlike in this chapter, and so typically luke with how he felt bad about them but didn't want to say anything.

    it was really good, thanks for updating!
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  • From Sere on September 11, 2007
    Please say that there isn't going to be any more betraying going on between Qui-Gon and Vader, (kissing, touching, more) and that Qui-Gon doesn't really want that and doesn't plan to do anything that might harm Luke. Pllleeeeeaaaaasssssseeeeeeeeeeeee!!! I can't stand the thought of it, and yet Qui-Gon definitely seems to be leaning that way. Loved the chapter anyways though, I always enjoy them, but Luke has already been through enough, and is going to have to deal with even more, he doesn't need that type of betrayel from either one of them.
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  • From ANON - Queen Serenity of the Naboo on September 10, 2007
    What? A new chapter? So soon? How did I miss this?! O.O

    Oh, my poor boys. *pets Luke and Vader* I am ACHING for an INTMATE father-son scene. *wink, wink* *nudge, nudge*

    I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on September 09, 2007
    BEAUTIFUL.

    After all the angst of the last chapter, it's nice to see the three of them starting to realize that they can be close with Luke having to worry anymore about Vader and Qui-Gon being intimate. They still have some issues, of course, but it'd be pretty boring if they didn't, heh.

    Good job on getting this chapter up so fast, especially since it was pretty damn long! Can't wait til the next update! ^_^
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  • From speedie234 on September 08, 2007
    more, more, more, more more!! please!!
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  • From ANON - reinrose82 on September 08, 2007
    Great chapter and thanks for getting it out so fast! I love the way your plot development is so intricate,
    yet it flows logically and continues to keep me in suspense. Eagerly waiting to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - ChaosProphet on September 07, 2007
    ooooh, they're leaving the executor in a fancy new toy - er, ship - back to tatooine where everything begins. fun adventures ahead. the tension between the three is really quite interesting; i especially want to see what this series of emotions between anakin and qui-gon goes and turns into. i didnt realize it till i read this new chapter, but the relationship you developed between luke and anakin was a subconscious reference for a couple of my character combinations in a new fic of mine. the way you've blended lover/teacher or student/relative dynamics into one relationship has intrigued me thru out this fic and inspired me to explore that kind of mixed dynamic and tension in my own writing. muchos kudos! cant wait for the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - pris on September 07, 2007
    wow-
    this was an intense chapter
    i want to cry for luke and his deep fear of loss and being unworthy and
    anakin and quigon-ahh

    i can not wait for more---

    great, great chapter
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  • From ANON - bluumberry on September 06, 2007
    I have to say I've reread this story far too many times. That's an accomplishment for a story that isn't even complete.
    I positively loved the new chapter. I was sitting at the edge of my chair because of my anxiousness. It filled all my expectations basically.
    I'm filled with many questions now though. It is said that Anakin won't betray Luke, will this be so though? And what about Qui-Gon? The possibilities of what will happen and what might are endless. While I'm not really looking forward to a threesome being a solution, Ican't help but want all three of them to be happy.
    I love your AnakinxLuke, but you also changed your awesome paternal (that has a new meaning after this chapter as well, I need to reread again) Qui-GonxAnakin into something I would enjoy reading as an individual story. I don't really know which pairing to like more now, and I feel slightly ashamed because of it, especially since I'm a person who only likes to read only one pairing per story.
    So as you can see, you have put my brain in quite a jam. I am even more anxious now to see how this will evolve, but at the same timeI'm dreading the knowledge. I just hope you come to the best conclusion and I'm not disappointed by it ^^ Cheers for the brilliant read and offering to the fandom!
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  • From ANON - gia on September 05, 2007
    WOW. That was an impressive chapter. Poor guys, they're all so fucked up.

    ;_; Can't you just make them do a threesome and solve this dilemma?
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  • From Madhater on September 04, 2007
    oh i love this story i cant wait to read an update I'm really looking forward to it. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Queen Serenity of the Naboo on August 31, 2007
    Whoa, this chapter was... I'm absolutely speechless as to how to describe it... And I just love Luke.

    I can't WAIT until the next one.
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  • From ANON - answers on August 28, 2007
    i hate qui gon now, luke must feel so betrayed, even if his father has done anything yet, hes sorta thinking about. he must be really insecure as well, poor kid. plus theres no where he can go to escape it, on that artifical ship. just thinking about it makes me want to go feel real air on my face. anyway, i'm a total luke supporter, and i think this was another brilliant chapter. update soon!
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  • From ruleroftravels on August 26, 2007
    I love this story SO MUCH!! It's the best fanfiction I've ever read. Your writing is wonderful, and amazing, and the plots you think of are so elaborate, and so creative, and just... genius! You rule, 100%. Totally.
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