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By : Raythe
  • From ANON - Regina on February 24, 2008
    You have converted me. I'm officially a Star Wars fan. I decided to read your fic last night even though I have never seen even one Star Wars movie and I loved it. My mom is a big Star Wars fan so I know a few basic things about it, but not much. I read Guardian Devil and it is one of my most favorite fan fics out there. I'm thinking about buying all the Star Wars movies just so I can watch them now.
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  • From ChibiBerry on February 11, 2008
    yay..an update. I have a feeling Damon is going to do something very bad..but i guess not everybody is well upen open minded..anyways..great job...please keep up the good work..and update(that is the most important thing). Im looking forward to your next chapter. take care. 8D
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  • From LadyDraculea on February 10, 2008
    Damn, you're not seriously leaving it there, are you? What a cliffhanger!

    Though I don't like it when Luke and Anakin are... divided, I do enjoy it when Luke makes use of his capabilities and proves that he is more then just a level head. While his abilities to revive and heal are extraordinary, it's nice to see Luke stand up for himself, even if it was towards his father. Though I would have preferred that he was more firm towards Damon. He just doesn't seem to get it, does he. Well, I'm sure whatever evil plot that Damon is concocting with be thwarted especially since he was nearly pulverized already. Silly man.

    Very much so looking forward to the next chapter,
    Lady D
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  • From ANON - Ellie on February 10, 2008
    I was so happy to see you had updated! I feel really sorry for Luke in this chapter. He can't let Vader kill everyone just to keep them safe but he can't stop Vader seeing that as a betrayal either. I like how you show Vader's vulnerability, how even though he loves Luke he's still scared that he's tainting him somehow. It was great that Luke stood up and declared their relationship and wasn't ashamed to admit they were together. Damon sounds dangerous, like a religious fanatic who totally believes in his cause. Thanks for the great chapter, sorry about the long rambling review!
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  • From alleycat88 on February 10, 2008
    AH! I read your update to find its DEPRESSING!? Im SO upset right now! Dammit! Damon I HATE YOU! He ahd to ruin everything for them. but I guess learning something like that is a shock...I would be pretty damn shocked. I like how Joran made it all better. He is really cute! Well Im glad you updated! I love this story. I do wonder though just how they will work out the love triangle. Well anyways thanks for the update! Please more soon!
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  • From ANON - reinrose82 on February 09, 2008
    Yeah! Updates! Good stuff; knew there was something coming with Trans. I can't
    wait to see where this goes. And speaking of Leia...what's Obi-wan up to?
    Can't wait to see he and Qui-gon meeting again. If that happens that is.
    Resist Writer's Block. Update soon!
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on February 09, 2008
    That was one white-hot chapter! I can't wait for the next one, although I'm a little worried about what may come---especially with Damon. I got a bad feeling about him and whatever his vow was...
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  • From ANON - Queen Serenity of the Naboo on February 09, 2008
    ARGH!!! So many emotions, both good and bad, but that was an EXCELLENT chapter; very much worth waiting for.

    Keep up the GREAT work!
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  • From ANON - pris on February 08, 2008
    totally and completly AWESOME
    wow what an intense chapter
    i am so hoping for another chapter soon

    wow!!!!!
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  • From Denizen on January 26, 2008
    This is one of my favorite Fan Fictions. Just thought you'd like to know. It's pretty hard to get into my top ten, considering I've read more fan fictions than I can count, but this story is definitely in my top five. Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Sunsinger on January 13, 2008
    I'm so glad that you are still working on this story, it's my favorite SW fic, what can I say I got a kink for incest ::grin::


    just a side note, while I was re-re-re-reading this the hit counter came up as Hits: 21666.... mwahahahahah
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  • From ANON - claire on December 20, 2007
    omg...........i'm always needing a mop and a bucket after reading this fic XD
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  • From ANON - gingermaya on December 19, 2007
    Gah, I was so preoccupied in my musings about Vader's issues with Lea that I forgot to type the rest of my review before hittin enter.

    I loved the sex-scene. To be honest, at first I wanted the spanking scene to happen, but the hot wax was a brilliant twist and you described it incredibly sexily.

    Btw, I am probably the only fan of your story who actually WANTS it to become a Qui-Gon/Anakin/Luke fic. It would be lovely if you go down that road. And hot too.
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  • From ANON - gingermaya on December 19, 2007
    You finally updated, YAY! Gosh, I was losing hope here. But it was definitely worth the waiting. It is one of the best chapters in the fic so far (although all chapters are utterly awesome). I loved the way Vader admitted how he wanted a real human being for a father instead the divinity of the force-birth. Poor Anakin. *sigh*

    I do not understand one thing, though. Why does he not talk about Lea at all? Even when he talked about the pregnant Padme, all he mentioned was Lea. What had she done even as an unborn baby to deserve such total lack of attention from him?
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  • From ANON - ellie on December 19, 2007
    Tried to review this over at wwomb but can't seem to review there. Anyway I'm so happy you updated and this chapter is really hot. I love Luke 'disobeying' Vader like that. Its great to see them so comfortable together. I'm also glad that Qui-gon wasn't in this chapter, was worrying that you were turning it into a Vader/Qui story. Can't wait to read more.
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