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Reviews for Forbidden

By : Raythe
  • From reinrose82 on August 14, 2008
    Still checking in once a week...exercising patience,
    just please don't abandon!
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  • From KarenLioncourt on July 25, 2008
    *puppy eyes* Am I hoping in vain for a threesome? I have such a crush on Qui-Gon. ^^
    Well, either way I love the story. Brilliant piece of work. More chapters would make me very happy.
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  • From ANON - Isaskar on July 18, 2008

    Hello

    I really like this story I have read it many times over and I think it is the best story I have come across so far so please write some more, bretty please
    I'm really geting desperade here

    -Isaskar-
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  • From ANON - Lavenderangel49 on July 08, 2008
    I love your story. Your ideas are well thought out and have such deep meanings. It remains true to the movie and characters yet puts an interesting twist on them too. It’s intriguing and has multiple mini-stories that run within the main story. I know that’s a difficult thing to do and keep track of and you’re handling them all very well. There are so many surprising turn of events that I can hardly stop reading. Also your writing itself is excellent. I can picture everything you write and understand the language of it.
    I look forward to reading more!

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  • From ANON - Nick on July 03, 2008
    I know it's not much, but it really impresses me how different of a tangent you take on the star wars story, and yet it is so correct and it works too. I see that you have been threatening not to continue writing this story anymore, but I beseech you to continue! My favorite idea in this story is that good and evil can and are supposed to coexist and that they are therefore relative concepts. This has long been a concept that I have held dear to my heart and the knowledge that someone else understands is quite comforting.
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on May 26, 2008
    Take all the time you need, but keep in mind that you're driving us crazy with waiting. :-D

    When I load this story from my bookmarks and see a new chapter has been uploaded, I will seriously cry. Or get aroused. Depends on how easily Luke and Vader make up, lol.
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  • From ANON - sarah on May 05, 2008
    This story is the best one I've read in a long time. I really hope you keep writing, it would be a shame if you stopped
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  • From ANON - reinrose82 on April 26, 2008
    Been a long month. An update would just make
    it all better. Please?
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  • From ANON - ranni on April 20, 2008
    I really dig this fic. I can't wait to see chapter 24 soon!
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  • From ANON - LiardDestrier on April 18, 2008
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE! I love your story so much it BUUUURRRNNNNS oh how it BURNS! But it has been a very long time since you updated! Could you at least let us know when you might have time to write more? I need my Inc-y goodness! Especially enjoy the Trans thing. I kept waiting for him to get drunk and rape Luke or something... ENOUGH OF ME! MORE OF YOU! Hopefully soon? *puppy eyes*
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  • From BlueBlaze25 on April 11, 2008
    I love this story so much. I just could not stop. The way you blend the fluff and angst, the plot and smut, is so well done. Many, many times I was left with my jaw open saying, "That did *not* just happen!" Oh, but it was so beautifully written. And with the angst and complications in the last couple of chapters, the make-up sex better be pretty dammed good, and I have no doubt in my mind that it will.
    Jeez, I can't even stop talking about how awesome this is! I think my friends are kinda annoyed, but it's totally worth it.
    I can't wait for the next chapter! Love you!
    ~Blue
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  • From ANON - Isaskar on April 01, 2008
    Hi!

    First, I never review to enybody ,yes I know I'am a very naughty reader, but even so I felt irresistable need to review to you.
    Your story Forbidden is just so ... I cant find english word to describe it.. it's ...juicy. Good ,in this case, is just so lame word so I dont want to use it. I like the beginning of love triangle bitween Anakin, Luke and qui-gon jinn at least in my mind it seem like love triangle.
    I also like your writting style it's clear, informative and hot.
    Please write new chapter soon o__O'

    -Isaskar-

    ps: I'am from Finland so my grammar is horrible, don't mind it
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  • From obrienrose on March 19, 2008
    Well, well, citizen Raythe, what can I say? ... I don't like Star Wars, I hate one-and-only-love stories, I am absolutly against the parent/child incest and yet here I am - a regular reader of your little dirty soap opera! You see, my situation is difficult and it's all your faut. A few final words - please, Please, PLEASE don't be so cruel with the poor Palpy - after all he's a evil twisted Vader-fan just like you ... And don't spoil Vader that much; I think he will enjoy a challenge.
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  • From ANON - bluumberry on March 17, 2008
    Umm I kind of forgot to review this chapter, maybe it was because I was squirming in my seat after reading it for the first time?

    I've just reread the story, AGAIN...and I can't get enough. You have such talent for writing, I'm practically green with envy.

    I keep looking for a "new chapter" button only to find none :< This pairing doesn't get the love it deserves, so this story really is the only way to satisfy my need to read something for the pairing. Oh don't worry, even if there were others, this would surely be my favourite still. I just wish there was something new to read every day but alas, I guess I'll have to settle for the fact that at least you keep writing and hopefully won't discontinue at any point :x

    I eagerly await the promised update this month!
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  • From ANON - LAS on February 26, 2008
    I love the story and I'm waiting for you to finish it since I've ready all 23 chaps 5 times.
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