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By : Raythe
  • From ShadowedStyx on January 01, 2006
    You are a deity. I love this story...Hell I love all your stories, this one is the best though. Chapter Nine has a weird thing with the text, just an FYI. Update soon please!!!!!!!!!

    ~~Don't steal the government doesn't like competition.
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  • From ANON - Azrael on January 01, 2006
    Yay you updatted, and only day after I reviewed. A wonderful News Year gift - especially the smut. (eyebrow wiggle) ^_^ Anyway I have a question, which I am sure will be answered in time, but, ah, what happened to Kenobi and that whole thing? It's very interesting and I would love to find out. This chapter was wonderfully written and I can't wait for more. Oh as a side note, there were weird little things in place of quotations. They looked like O's and E's with squigly things on top of them. Very good chapter, I enjoyed it and can't wait to find out what happens to them on the planet. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Azrael on January 01, 2006
    Wonderfully written. Good Luke and Vader fics are hard to come bye. You keep Vader in character which is good, no nancing Vader with peace signs and a tie die t-shirt which seems to be the product of some of these fics. Anyway please update soon it's a good story and plot line. (The Palpatine interference is interesting)
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  • From ANON - tenohikari on December 31, 2005
    Wow, I'm amazed - The story is very well written, and I loved the last two chapters with the Luke and Young Vader pairing um ... more please?
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 28, 2005
    I love this story i love all Luke x Vader story i would like it if there were more Luke x Vader story like this one update soon
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  • From ANON - angelpred on December 23, 2005
    please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!pleaseeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • From ANON - Miranda on December 22, 2005
    PLEASE UPDATE!
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  • From ANON - ~L~ on December 20, 2005
    *squeals with delight!*
    Please, oh please........more!!!!!!!
    I found you fic by accident a few months ago and have been excedingly anxious for more. It is so beautiful!! I can't find any fiction which involves Luke/Anakin any where, well of course with the exception of Skywolves fic. Your fic is soooooooo enjoyable, so sweet. I just can't stop reading it over and over and over again. Please tell me you have more really soon, PLEASE!!!!!!! Sorry for all the pressure but you seem to be the only other one writing this incredible stuff.......don't stop!!!! Oh, Luke is something else!! And Anakin.....I can't see how he can hold himself back from just gobbling Luke up. Boy I would just cuddle the poor thing to death if O could. With all that strength, the height, the devilishly handsome looks of Anakin.......if I were he, I would so have my arms wrapped around that golden god of mine, Luke, all the time. Or have baby blue eyes tucked safely inside that long, swirly black cape with me.
    Luke is so vulnerable. You character of him is simply mavelous. I love it!!!! I can so picture him. Longish blond hair, blue eyes so deep, that golden glow all over that thin frail looking body. And those looks, his hidden strength but he just screams he needs protection!!!! I am really lovin' it, and I really need more.........PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't get enough!!!!
    ~L~
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  • From ANON - Loki on December 11, 2005
    This is absolutely fantastic. It's such a shame this pairing is so rare...cos woah, it's hot. I love how you're progressing their 'relationship', and you've kept both characters very believable. I can't wait to see everyone else's reaction to Vader's new 'look'. Is he going to tell Luke his real name at some point? Oh, and I am anxiously awaiting the arrival of the smut, this chapter (8) has only whetted my appetite! Excellent writing and storyline!

    ~Loki
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  • From ANON - Vampirezdarkgurl on December 10, 2005
    This is a great story. Every chapter leaves me wanting to read more. I can't wait for the next chapter. Update again soon.
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  • From ANON - angelpred on December 09, 2005
    wow,your story is fantastic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I love the pair Vader and Luke,and them relationship!!!!!!!!!
    And you are very good to write!!!!!!!!!!!
    Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Pleaseeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Marie on December 06, 2005
    I really do like this story so please continue :)
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  • From ANON - Louis, the Sarcastic Muse on November 30, 2005
    OMG!!! I absolutly adore your story! I've been reading and watching avidly for any updates and I must say that wonders never cease with you. I've even read DH (which makes me go *fangirlsqwee* every single time ^^). I have to admit that before I even read Forbidden I had never thought of Luke and Vader going at it like bunnies. So congrats to you on a job well done!!!!!! *love and kisses* Please update as soon as you can, the cliffy is strangling me with anticipation!!!!!!!

    ~Louis
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  • From ANON - Answers on November 30, 2005
    OH MY GOSH!!! I can't beleive you updated! I came home and checked like i always do, and i nearly had a fit when there was a new chap!!! I love this story, the chapter was excellent Anakin's hot again! And luke healed him! YEY! And i can't wait to see how he reacts to Lukes punishment. I love how youv'e written Luke, so innocent, and Anakins so dark... will Luke start to call him Anakin, Annie, cause i love that name, but i understand if he doesn't cause i suppose it reminds him of his past to much. WIll he be fully healed in the next chap? I hope so, that way more... things... can happen Please dont take as long to update this time, it's my most favourite story!!!!! And your my favourite writer. I read all of your other stories, Gaurdian Devil is equal with Forbidden, and i love Dark Horizons. (i sound like a groupie) PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - pris on November 30, 2005
    WOW...this was sooooo good. the images were fantastic and i love the characterization of vader and luke--ying and yang. i can not wait for more....more!
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