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By : Raythe
  • From ANON - Anon on January 22, 2006
    Oh, could you email me when you update?

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  • From ANON - Ladynaye on January 22, 2006
    Damned FF.net, Forbidden is not there anymore!! BAH!! Good thing for AFF.net :-)!! I love this story too much and I can't wait for an update. BTW, My FF.net nick is Missnaye :-).
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  • From ANON - eddy on January 21, 2006
    i have to say.. i have mixed feelings about this piece.

    there are many of the concepts that i do like, in particular, luke's submissive nature, his fixation on his father from a young age, vader's domination of him, and the utter hotness of the two of them together. i think i liked it better when it was of questionable consent, but luke's craving of what he still sort of considers to be wrong is beautiful.

    but to that, i find myself turned off by a number of things. i feel that you lost out on the oppertunity to have a lot more drama by making yoda and ben conspiring to kill luke and basically 'evil' in terms of the plotline.. and don't bring up the doing it for greater good argument, that's still making luke into a princess. having them really wanting luke on their side for their beleifs instead of making them into bad guys to just be disobeyed as traitors simplifys so much, keeping things basically black and white but reversing it. that was probably my biggest problem with it, but also, great power comes at great cost. vader sacrificed so much of himself to have his force powers, palpatine did also. they were once normal men but their power corrupted them. likewise, luke and yoda and ben required a lot of meditation and a lot of work to get their powers, so giving vader and luke amazing omg !!! powers all of a sudden seems like a cop-out. even if the cost for luke to use healing would be to kill something else (in Carnivale, ben must kill birds or fish to heal broken bones or bring life to a dying man), there should have been a cost, i think. it would have been more credible. i think your luke is a bit too girly, especially with the uncle owen beat me as a child and that's why i'm submissive argument (i know yours isn't that extreme, but its in that direction) but i think you justify it enough.

    i have the list only because i so loved the idea and some of the emotions you bring up, especially the wrongness with the incest, the darkside/lightside conflict.. and the sheer hotness of it. just some of the details got in the way.

    now i want to do a similar themed piece.. hmm.
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  • From ANON - NiennaVala on January 20, 2006
    One of the most wickedly beautiful things I've ever read! This is pure poetry, and so hot! Please, please, please, for the love of the Force, you must keep going with this!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 20, 2006
    Gahhh! You've made me break mom's rule! She does not like this site... Oh well, this story is so good it's worth the grounding I'll get if she finds out. I like the story, and think that its stupid that it got taken off of ff.net. N
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  • From ANON - Shadow on January 16, 2006
    Wonderful story, can't wait to read the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - pris on January 06, 2006
    yeah! great chapter and cant wait for more...u r too good at this!
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  • From ANON - Queen Serenity of the Naboo on January 04, 2006
    This is the only story about Vader/Luke that's worth reading! ^^ I totally love the bond between them. I need to know what's gonna happen next! >< UPDATE!!!
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  • From ANON - Robyn on January 03, 2006
    This is fantastic. I love Darth Vader/Luke, and though it's hard to find, I'm never disappointed when I managed to stumble across a fic about them. I hope you update soon. I can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - arianna on January 03, 2006
    wow, this story is absolutely amazing. loved the last chapeter!!!
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  • From ANON - pureevil230 on January 02, 2006
    yay! you updated!

    i love how cute anakin and luke are together. yep luke is submissive love it.

    your romances scenes are so sweet not rushed porn...better than I would write lol.

    can't wait for more glad luke helped heal him hope he can heal the rest of him.

    UPDATE SOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Answers on January 02, 2006
    FUCKING AWESOME!!!!!!!!! I know this was like a zillion pages long, but it didn't seem long enough! your story's so entrancing that time flys and then suddenly i'm at the end of the chapter, left hanging! Ot's cruel Oh my God i love it! You wrote the flash back so well! And Luke was gorgeous and sweet and just so fun to read and Vader was hot in every way (isn't he always?) And oh god, i dont even want to think about the wait until the next chapter, cause if it's more then 2 weeks then i know i'll die or go insane! Please for the love of all things Star Wars, UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!! I think i like this one even more then Gaurdian Devil, which is saying something cause i like built a shrine for that story. I know your busy and it probably takes you ages to write a chap ( cause it would be scary if they were this good on your first try!!) but for the sake of my health, take a day off and just WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE!!!!
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  • From ANON - Vampirezdarkgurl on January 02, 2006
    Great, wonderful,excelent, (and any other praise-filled words) anyway I loved the chapter and can't wait to read the next one. Just a little note there were some problems with the text, but only when you were putting things in quotes. Update again soon please, because I absolutely love this story. I must say it is very original and well written.
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  • From ANON - T.H. on January 02, 2006
    Yay! This is getting better with each chapter. Please update again soon, I will be waiting until then. Hope it isn't too long of a wait. And Just to let you know the symbols (ie: ",',etc") Aren't appering in the story they are coming up as O's and other symbols. But I got what was being said just letting you know.
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  • From ANON - Marie on January 01, 2006
    Another terrific chapter I cannot wait for more!
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