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By : Raythe
  • From ANON - Fallen on October 27, 2006
    Okay the first time I saw this paring for your story I wasn't going to read it but something told me to give it a try. I'm happy I did since the first chapther I have been hooked read all 17 chapters in two days just couldn't stop reading this excellent story. Love how you ended Chapter 17 (Luke's going to get it lol) and can't wait for the battle between Vader and Palpatine.

    Keep up the great work now I'm off to read your other stories.
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  • From ANON - Saph on October 20, 2006
    Started good, went to better, then got really intersting. Update soon please.
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  • From ANON - Reader_Mike on October 16, 2006
    I love your story so far, I've been keeping an eye on it for awhile now waiting for you to update, now that you have I can't wait for the next ^.^ Especially the oh so nice encounter in the jail cell that luke will certainly enjoy ^.^
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  • From ANON - Dana on October 16, 2006
    I love this story so much! I can't wait for the prison scene! I adore the detail you put into your writing! Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - claire on October 16, 2006
    ohh my what is gonna happen!?
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  • From ANON - Answers on October 15, 2006
    That was great, though i'm really starting to hate that archive. And what was the relationship with Qui-Gon and Vader that it showed? Sounded awfully...freindly. I worry for Luke. I like the way Vader is 'setting the scene' for Luke's fantasy. Can't wait till the next chapter. :]
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  • From ANON - RavenNolan on October 14, 2006
    This story is Addicting! Nicely done. I'm not one for reading slash or incest stories, but this one was interesting and now I'm completely hooked. The storyline is rather interesting. It keeps the reader engaged, in my opinion. Your take on the Jedi and Sith is an interesting one. Can't wait for the next post as I'm interested in seeing what happens next.
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  • From ANON - traci on October 14, 2006
    Guh! Love it, absolutely love it.
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  • From ANON - Queen Serenity of the Naboo on October 14, 2006
    I'm addicted to this story. I really am. I check every day and every night to see if you've updated. I have no life anymore thanks to this story.
    Whoo! I was worried for Luke wondering what Vader was going to do to him as punishment after disobeying him but instead we got a very nice and rather desperate love scene. ^^
    I don't even want to imagine what Vader and Qui-Gon were in their past lives cuz that's just too much for me. o0
    Sneaky Vader! Having Luke "arrested" so that they can act out Luke's fantasy. X3 At least that's what I think it is, right?
    And I wonder whatcha going to do with Han and Chewie? Cuz I really want them to be on Luke's side; from Han's last appearence, even with Leia pressing up against him, he *still* wanted to hear Luke's side, which made me hope that he wasn't deceived like Leia and the others wore. n.n
    Eagerly awating the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Emms on October 10, 2006
    Omg, I looooove this story. Plz update soon!!

    -Emms
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  • From ANON - neosildrake on October 05, 2006
    Hi! it's neosildrake again.

    don't let incest-flamers get to you. This is not about incest, it's about love. We humans are way too inclined in our morals that stem forth from religious believes.
    I don't really care about incest, slash, hetero or whatever, as long as it is consentual. That's the only thing that counts in my book.
    I greatly disaproove of rape and violence-slavery ffs. Doesn't mean I flame everyone who writes or read them. It's fanfiction/fiction after all.
    Dunno why people complain about slash or incest, but read and write rape and other non-consensual stuff... Hypocrites - all of them...

    CU, have fun and smile,
    neosildrake

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  • From ANON - neosildrake on October 05, 2006
    A really great story and extremely well written, not only the lemons but everything else too.
    I always wanted to read a story that has V/L slash, a different view of the Balance of the Force and such, without turning into a dark-evil Luke story.
    I also like your including of Qui-Gon. I always asked myself what way Anakin would have choosen, if he had been his master.
    Also, what's with Leia, Han and the others? I actually like them and I would think it great, when in the end they would see that they have been manipulated. I think Han, Chewie and Lando are a bit more open minded to what's going on and not so easily influenced by Kenobi and co. If only because of their background and their own experiences.
    They could try to find out what happened to Luke behind the rebel-alliances back.
    I dunno if or how fast Leia would be able to jump over her shadow, especially after the destruction of Alderaan and what else she endured at Vaders hands.
    However, I hope you could make it so that at least Han and Chewie stay on Lukes side.

    ... You mentioned chapter 17... I can't wait for the rebel-prisoner fantasy... ^^

    Another thing... Damon Trans. I like him as I like all the 4 troopers Luke helped. ... Don't you think he needs another object for his affection? Or do you intend to have him... otherwise permanently discouraged by Vader?

    Anyway, I hope you update soon!

    CU, have fun and smile,
    neosildrake
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  • From ANON - theozz on September 30, 2006
    I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    PLEASE UPDATE SOON
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  • From Nympho on September 27, 2006
    You have quite the gift for writing m/m erotica. The mental image of those two together will keep be humming for weeks! Absolutely brilliant work, and I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Nympho on September 27, 2006
    Oh my stars! My dear, you have done the impossible- you have taken a die hard incest hater and enthralled her in a story that features it prominently. I actually clicked on the story by mistake and once I started I couldn't stop. You nearly lost me with the "daddy" moniker but that could be because it makes me think of the phrasse "Who's you daddy" and puts it in a whole new light. :) I eagerly await new additions to this marvelous story.
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