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By : WillowWoman
  • From ANON - SJ on April 06, 2014
    okay i have to say this...i love ur stories!!! i have just zoomed through the first two and now this one. they are soo good! like wow. wish jack was a little more like kyra from the movies, but different story line. no biggie. love it all though! im soo hooked!

    i hope you update soon and finish this story!!! :D just love it all!

    take care!
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  • From RatedRGirl83 on August 07, 2011
    I am so loving this story! I really hope to see an update one day (hopefully soon) I gotta know what happens.
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  • From IntegraHellsing on November 28, 2008
    The suspence is killing me!!!!!!!! I feel kinda pethetic really, Im almost as despret for Riddick to find Jack as he is and Im not even in his situation.

    Anyway..... This is a very good series so far. please continue
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  • From trucrystal on October 26, 2008
    Oh my gosh! You can't stop there! Please write fast and update soon, I'm loving this story! :)
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  • From HardyHarr on April 26, 2008
    omg! please finish this! It's so awesome...(frantic reader wringing hands)...must know what happens, must know!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 23, 2008
    Hi, I love this fic, I was wondering if you have any more of it, I'm addicted. Many thanks
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  • From Legacy on January 24, 2008
    I have to say when I first started to read this series I stopped midway through because I thought you had Riddick act a bit OOC with his taking Jack. But as I read through all the other stories in the section I realized that there wasn't really too many other options out there, so I went back to reading. I am glad I did, the level that you weaved the two of them together to the story and the bond that was slowly forming was very intriguing. I also loved the torn emotions shown with Riddick fighting his nature to consummate Jack with any means and his want to wait and allow her to offer herself up to him. I was on edge in the last series when Riddick came to the edge of raping Jack, but at the last minute remembered who he was, so to speak and stopped.

    I haven't read the third part of the series through yet because you haven't finished it. I want to wait for the emotional roller coaster that will be. ^^
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  • From kili087 on May 01, 2007
    please up date its agood story

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  • From AletaRois on April 22, 2007
    WHY!? *cries* Please continue!
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  • From ANON - Jags on November 20, 2006
    I am absolutely hooked on this story! I read the first two parts and just can't get enough! I'd like you to email me at akkirby@wichita.edu when you update it. thanks.

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  • From ANON - Anon on July 18, 2006
    You have to continue this. i need to know what happens next or i'm going to go insane
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  • From ANON - Doomsday on February 01, 2006
    Hey, I really love the series. It's actually what got me interested in Pitch Black fanfiction. I usually stick to anime, but one day while I was doing a search I stumbled upon this little treasure. Seriously, you got me hooked. I love how you portrayed the inner thoughts and conflicts of Riddick. It's just as complex and detailed as I imagine the real Riddick would be. You're a really great writer. Everything was always clear and understandable, which can be hard to do when you're getting into a person's head. But you made everything flow together naturally. I also appreciate your attention to detail when it comes to grammar and spelling. A lot of authors just send their work out without any thought toward those who might be reading it. It's a shame. Sometimes they have a storyline or plot that's really great but it ends up being ruined by poor grammar and misspellings. It takes a lot of work, noone's perfect after all, but if you care about your writing then you should do your best to make it as great as you can. Anyway, I really like your work. (The Claimer's Keeps trilogy isn't the only fic I've read) Keep it up. I hope, someday, you get around to finishing this. ^_^

    ~Ash~
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  • From MsMercury on January 18, 2006
    Please, please update soon! I really love this trilogy!
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  • From ANON - Cassey on January 08, 2006
    Please update this real soon, I really want to read more, and I am sure others who have reviewed would love to read more of this great story too!!!
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  • From ANON - Kim on January 06, 2006
    That was a great story, please update soon, I would love to read more!!!!
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