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Reviews for A Focus Of Will

By : tiddlywinks
  • From ANON - Amber on October 30, 2005
    I think for a short story your writing was really interesting... you should add on to it.
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  • From ANON - Boo on October 26, 2005
    Oh.
    My.
    Gosh.
    *screams*
    That was the most awesomest (is that even a word?) Labyrinth fic I've ever read.
    Woot. *fans self*
    I'd like to see more of it. :)
    Very good job. *claps*
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  • From ANON - Morwen Re on October 25, 2005
    good! is there a sequel or a next chapter on the way soon? i hope there is because i liked both the plot and the smut!
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  • From ANON - SeductionsClaim on October 24, 2005
    A refreshing take on Jareth! Not sappy love besotted...a nice change of pace!
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  • From ANON - Sadomasochistic on October 23, 2005
    i loved it!!! that was awesome!! you should write more!
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  • From ANON - TheGirlWhoLovesHim on October 23, 2005
    This was really hot and twisted...wow...
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  • From ANON - anon on October 22, 2005
    I don't usually write reviews, but this was so good. The mood was absolutely electric. I loved the way you characterized Jareth. I'm definitely going to look up all the other stuff you've written.
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  • From EvilKittenn on October 22, 2005
    Wow... Bravo. *stands and applauds* Your wiring was wonderful and the description was awesome. I truley enjoyed reading this story. I think you should continue it, because I know there is so much more you want to write. I am happy that you took the time to draw it out, and I am also happy with the way it ended. Now, I don't like the fact that Sarah is such a lucky little bitch... but, we all have to dream... right??

    A job well done.

    Kittenn
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  • From ANON - Loki on October 21, 2005
    I truly can't think of anything being wrong with this. I'm sure if I went over it with a fine comb I'd find *something*, but it's too good a story to spoil with petty complaints. And it truly is good. Most of the Sarah/Jareth stories are just PWPs, but this had a sense of actually fitting in well with the film. I think you had both characters down perfectly *smiles dreamily at arrogant Jareth* so great job!

    ~Loki
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