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Reviews for In the Heart of a Warrior

By : JulieL
  • From ANON - Chancelor22 on October 31, 2005
    Keep the updates coming! I am really into this story and I can't wait for the next chapter to hit the net!
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  • From ANON - Nahau on October 27, 2005
    I really liked this chapter, it was really good. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Mal\'fan on October 26, 2005
    Thanks for the update. Good job!
    update again soon, it's really intresting
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  • From ANON - Chancelor22 on October 26, 2005
    Good. Now I must have more. I will perish without more! MORE! Keep up the great work. I really, really like this story. I check for updates like 4 times a day! Can't wait.
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  • From ANON - silentVoid on October 26, 2005
    LOL, that was funny! Good work
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  • From ANON - circle of addictions on October 21, 2005
    This was great! Please update soon
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  • From ANON - silentVoid on October 20, 2005
    Sorry ^^;; The Chapter was cut off for a second and I thought you only had a paragraph.

    Anyway, I like this chapter!
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  • From ANON - lorna on October 20, 2005
    that was cute. please continue i am interested in what will happen next
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  • From ANON - silentVoid on October 20, 2005
    Is that it?
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  • From ANON - Nahau on October 14, 2005
    The concept for the story is amazing. But you might want to go back and edit. Some of it was hard for me to understand, mostly due to grammar. Don't feel bad though, my grammar sucks far worse. Anyway, you might want to go back and reword some of the story and give it more vocabulary. Like the word whore, I'm not saying you shouldn't write it, I just think you shouldn't use it over and over again. But this your story and not mine. Thanks for sharing and I like the story, I'm sure you will improve.
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  • From ANON - Silent_void on October 11, 2005
    Hooohhh! This is getting good!
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  • From ANON - Millen Stryker on October 10, 2005
    *Shakes head* The government just won't leave the Preds alone, will they? I hope you continue to write this good fic. I can't wait to fing out what happens afterward.
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  • From ANON - Chancelor22 on October 09, 2005
    UH OH! I smell government scum coming into the picture. Good chappy. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Silent_Void on October 09, 2005
    Hehe, Funny Wavy Man
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  • From ANON - Chancelor22 on October 07, 2005
    HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! It took me a minute to get that he is telling a story. Don't you just love annoying little brothers?! Well, another good chappy...still leading up to something...really good I hope. Can't wait to read.
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