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Reviews for In the Heart of a Warrior

By : JulieL
  • From ANON - ravenwillow on April 23, 2011
    please,please put up more chapters im realy getting into the story i dont want that to be where it ends your such a talented writer im inlove with the story keep up the good work
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  • From atlanteangoddess on January 03, 2009
    more please!!!
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  • From Divinatwila on November 10, 2008
    Well your story is interesting. You go in depth to describe things. A little too wordy sometimes, but it can be cut. Also I find myself having to pay extra attention because some parts get very confusing. Like when they are telling the story of the past and you switch to the present. Also there where some grammatical errors. But all in all it has potential. I suggest revising it or getting someone to look at it before submitting. It makes all the difference. The new race, Dreitans are they space vampires? I'm not sold on them. But the story is pretty cool. This is me being constructive. Don't take offense.
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  • From ANON - angelina on November 03, 2008
    this is awsome!! please write more! an update soon would be heaven and i have one question about kelly's dream that she had towards the beginning of the story ( i just caught up with all of the chapters) is she gonna have two mates or was that ki'taka and kien'ata that she saw or ki'taka and some one else? i wanna know please!!
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  • From atlanteangoddess on October 14, 2008
    a very wonderful story. i hope to see more soon!!!!!
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  • From Kalar on April 25, 2007
    Hello shortest_warrior. My parents are doing better now. Thank you for asking. I can't remember how I spelled it but I changed it to "Sjo'ren". I hope to see anothr story from you. I love all the stories...please please please...with candy coated Preds on top...hahahaha. ,,,=^..^=,,,
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  • From MuseofScrolls on March 14, 2007
    As I've told you time and time before, I cannot wait until you update this one (and your other stories, too). =) There's so much going on and many people (Yautja and human) involved, it just draws you into the story. Hoping your update will be soon, k, Shorty?
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  • From ANON - scarslady13 on July 20, 2006
    the story is great, getting writing babe
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  • From ANON - shortest_warrior on July 09, 2006
    Hi Spider, yes I'm going to return. I'm fixing up the story and hopefully making it better. I've also had a bunny hopping around in my head for a third story and at the moment I can't seem to get anything else done but it out and I hate/love it. I want to have at least the number of chapters I've already posted fixed up and ready to go, but I maybe persuaded otherwise. I've got a few done but I'm getting some of the girls to read over them. I've fixed up my comma stuff ups as Lorna will aggree now all I've got is fragments. Oh well! I'm only Ooman right.
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  • From ANON - Spider on July 07, 2006
    BTW I can spell just not on paper
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  • From ANON - Spider on July 07, 2006
    Are you ever going to post again the answer you should return wit is YES.
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  • From ANON - Courtney on February 13, 2006
    omg!!!!!!! i loved it. all of it. could you, by any chance, add and add more more more???? PLEASE
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  • From ANON - Anna on February 01, 2006
    I absolutely love this story!!!!! I can't wait to read what will happen next. Keep it up, and update soon!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 30, 2006
    i love your story and i cant wait til you update it!!!
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  • From ANON - circle of addictions on January 29, 2006
    That was great. I laughed through out the whole chapter! Kelly getting a mic check from a Yautja LOL
    Please update soon. I can't wait for her to find out who he really is!
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