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By : Ladykohl
  • From ANON - Linwe_Amari on December 25, 2005
    lol! Well, if I got an Anakin for Christmas...... *raises eyebrows a few times* lol!

    Please update soon! Where the hell do you come up with this brillant stuff, huh? I really hope there's a happy ending....anyway, again, please update soon.

    ~Katie
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  • From ANON - Sierra on December 25, 2005
    MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!!!
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  • From on December 22, 2005
    Through Padme's reflections, I think that you did a great job giving us an accurate glimpse at what their relationship was like before Anakin turned. It was based on a foundation cloaked in lies and deceit, fraught with constant stress and anxiety caused by long separations, and filled with disappointment and sadness in every stolen moment together. It was not a healthy situation for either one of them.

    They were two very unhappy people -- not too much has changed.
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  • From ANON - rachel657062 on December 22, 2005
    Look what I noticed:


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    In the flashback:

    Crying was all I could do to ease the pain.
    He had asked me not to cry, and I had to be strong. I did not want his most recent memory of us together to be one of me crying helplessly.



    After the flashback:

    Crying was so utterly useless


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    Can we say symbolism? lol.



    ok. I think that's enough analysis for today. I'll let other people review (and not read my silliness)



    - Rachel
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  • From ANON - jeannie on December 22, 2005
    you always leave us with a cliff hanger... but damn... Vader keeps getting more evil as the chapter goes on.
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  • From ANON - rachel657062 on December 22, 2005
    Anakin's departure (the cloak, leaving Padme for a more darkened area) = SYMBOLISM . Yay me. ...I see it. (Note - I'm feeling giddy). :)

    - Rachel
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  • From ANON - rachel657062 on December 22, 2005
    Hi Chance,

    I love how you give us nice glimpses back in time. ...and regarding symbolism, the only thing that stands out is the hand-holding part. I'll be sure to reread this chapter and catch onto more symbolism.

    So...is Obi-Wan going to try and free Padme from the cell Vader's put her in? I'm trying to imagine future chapters that have Padme stuck in a cell...and it gets kind of boring. Your imagination is cool though, you'll certainly think of something.

    I'm now free from college (till late January), so I'll be checking in more frequently. I hope you update again soon.

    - Rachel
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  • From ANON - Penny on December 21, 2005
    This is a fantastic story. I love your portrayal of Anakin/Vader. I am looking forward to your upcoming chapters.
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  • From ANON - Sierra on December 21, 2005
    I buy into your explanation quite well, it's always what I sort of thought of Anakin, too. Given the fact that he DOES repent and turn back to the good side in Episode VI, so clearly there is some good left in him somewhere!!! Though it sure is a long, heartbreaking road till he find its. One that I'm hoping isn't going to end anytime soon because I'm enjoying it too much!

    Awesome work in both chapters, I don't know how I do it, but I feel sorry for all of the characters. I don't usually even like original characters, but yours is so well-written and detailed that I can't help but like her!

    MORE SOON!
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  • From ANON - kate on December 21, 2005
    Great chapter. I love how you portray the contrast between what Vader/Anakin wants to happen and reality. Very potent, and true to the thought pattern of someone like him.
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  • From ANON - me on December 20, 2005
    Oh this such an awesome story. you totally and perfectly explained what you were saying in your note by that one last sentence in this chapter. Awesome.
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  • From Ladykohl on December 20, 2005
    This is the response I got to my email. I wanted to post it so no one gets mad at Hollene for flaming. I just think she was expressing her opinion. Thanks to the people who were sticking up for me and my story. I'm very happy to see I have such strong supporters behind me!



    Hello,

    Thank you very much for A reply...



    I see that you are purely trying to do a "What if" Fic... Which is a very great way to explore creativity. Thank you for clearing up that this is not meant to go in line with the originals at all.



    But I must say it is VERY well written. Being a well of star wars knowlege I can tell you if this story was true it would probably go just like this...



    And I was very happy when Vader killed the Emperor... Great moment.



    So thank you very much,



    Hollene





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  • From ANON - Mel on December 20, 2005
    It was a GREAT chapter !! I want more :)) !!
    and Hollene, Do you know what a fiction is ?
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  • From ANON - jeannie on December 20, 2005
    this was a powerful chapter. im dying to know what's next for them all.
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  • From ANON - doloris on December 20, 2005
    Hey it's me again and I just read Hollene reviews. I think that she totally forgotten that this is what..............
    ADULT FANFICTION!!! But it's a good thing that finally someone disapprove of this story because truth be told
    they wish they could write something like this story themselves lol!! You haven't ruining the story, it was right on. You'll have
    your supporters to defend you all the way. Luv ya Chance!!!
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