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Reviews for Forget Me Not

By : Ladykohl
  • From ANON - Marie on December 30, 2005
    I am enjoying this story a lot ignore the flamers they aren't worth the typing space.
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  • From ANON - Gem on December 29, 2005
    Don't listen to the flamers. Your story is wonderful. It's well written and the emotions/angst is portrayed perfectly.
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  • From ANON - doloris on December 29, 2005
    YOU SAID IT CHANCE!!! TELL IT LIKE IT IS!!! LOL
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  • From ANON - Snow on December 29, 2005
    i like and dislike this story really i like it but anakin/vader's indesisviness is kinda getting to me also id like obi back in the picture for a bit there it seemed they might reconsile.

    Snow
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  • From WolfWoman on December 29, 2005
    I must say that I am enjoying this story. The conflict in Vader is very believable, and although he does terrible things, he doesn't seem to be completely evil. Ignore the flames and write more soon!
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  • From ANON - Pandora on December 29, 2005
    Chance:
    I don't know who's flaming you...I love this story. I check for updates every single day. My ONLY complaint is that it doesn't get updated fast enough. Your writing style flows very well, and I think that you are articulating Anakin/Vader's struggle VERY well. I'd like to see him confirm the kids are his...I mean WE have DNA testing & haven't invented a warp drive.
    I did want to ask...when were the two little kids murdered. I'd sure like to see that turn out to be a mistake on their mother's part. Sort of a cruel joke on Vader's part. I have a funny reaction any time kids or dogs are killed maliciously. That's about the only thing that MIGHT have turned me off of this story...but I was holding on to see if maybe Vader made her THINK he'd killed the kids. That was his one big trump card with her, and you can't undo it once it's done.
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  • From ANON - Sierra on December 29, 2005
    What a sad comparison! Between Anakin's little daydream and what really happened with him and Padme. I wonder why he didn't just beg for forgiveness like he obviusly wanted to, though I suppose maybe his pride is preventing something like that. I don't know, but while I'm not convinced he's past the point of redemption, I think he's gone past the point of where Padme could forgive him. Doing what he did (no spoilers! lol) most likely pushed her past that.

    MORE???
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  • From ANON - kate on December 29, 2005
    Very sad, moving chapter. I love the juxtaposition.
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  • From on December 28, 2005
    I have been following this story from the beginning and I am finally taking the time to review. The story is so dark and haunting. The pain both Anakin and Padmé are going through makes it a very difficult read. I fear that there will be no happy ending to this piece. You feel so sorry for both of them as well as Si-Nia, who is truly the innocent in all of this. I both anticipate and dread the remaining chapters.
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  • From ANON - me on December 28, 2005
    well you have managed to smah me again. I truly thought the dream sequence was the real thing. Then that last sentence just kills you. Why can't he just make his drream come true. He could in heartbeat if he just tried.
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  • From ANON - doloris on December 27, 2005
    It's me again. PLEASE don't come to an end because I wanted to see what Vader is
    going to do with Si-Nia, I mean we really didn't read that much about her, but even
    though this is about Padme and Vader.
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  • From ANON - doloris on December 27, 2005
    This is a very sad chapter!!! You are doing a great job Chance!!!
    Please update soon!!!

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  • From ANON - jeannie on December 27, 2005
    wow...so the part of anakin's redemption was just a day dream? god... i feel so terrible for padme... please write more...
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  • From on December 27, 2005
    Well, we never actually heard him give the order, but if Vader has in fact toasted Padme’s family, I’m afraid the only redemption that he is going to find is probably at the end of his son’s lightsaber in about twenty years.

    I am not going to get all philosophical this time. My only thought is that someone needs to slap that boy upside his head…really, really hard several times--maybe that would knock some seriously needed sense into that stubborn numskull of his.

    I have loved this story from the very first sentence, and I hate the idea that you’re going to have it come to a conclusion. Getting into Vader’s world has been a little like looking at a horrible accident – it is painful to see, but you just can’t turn your eyes away because it’s so compelling. Thank you.



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  • From ANON - jeannie on December 26, 2005
    i dont know whether to be happy or sad that you wrote more. i dont want this story the end!! it is really one of the greatest star wars fanfictions i've ever read. it's not fluffy... but dark and shows what i assume would be the true story of anakin and padme. i love it and i'm gonna be sad to see it end. i hope you write many more star wars fanfics after this. much love and merry christmas.. happy holidayss!
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