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Reviews for Forget Me Not

By : Ladykohl
  • From ANON - Ashla on November 10, 2005
    I read this fic today and really enjoyed it. It pulled me in from the very beginning. Very well written. I hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - Busanda on November 10, 2005
    I found this story recently, and after I read it, I read your other Anakin/Padme story, "Time Retreating" -- I think that they are both fantastic, by the way. What I really appreciated was the consistency in the Anakin/Vader character from "Time Retreating" to "Forget Me Not" -- one can clearly see the the same seriously-troubled, young man in both stories.

    I also applaud you on not trying to sugar coat Vader. So much of the Star Wars fan fiction out there is totally dedicated to turning him into a pile of gooey mush. It's the Poor Ani Syndrome, which causes people to excuse the horrid choices he makes and the heinous things he does because, after all, he started out good, didn't he?

    Personally, I've never been comfortable buying into the Obi-wan view of Vader -- the belief that somehow Anakin and Vader are two disparate beings. I've always believed that a lot of what you see in Darth Vader later on was always present in Anakin Skywalker. I believe, as Count Dooku realizes (albeit too late for him) in the Revenge of the Sith novel, that Anakin was already part Sith long before he ever got on his knees to Palpatine.

    Vader is evil. He should be scary. He is a villain -- cold-hearted and cunning. And, I thank you for not shying away from that fact.

    Keep up the excellent work. I look forward to further installments.
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  • From ANON - Diz on November 10, 2005
    Arrrgh, I hope he doesn't hurt the kids. This is a disturbing story, but I still feel a glimmer of sympathy for Anakin. I am glad to see he won the showdown with the Emperor. In ROTJ, that's when Vader is redeemed, of course, but I am not sure that your Vader is on the same path.
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  • From ANON - RuthM on November 10, 2005
    Where's the rest of it?????????? You can't do this to me! PLEASE finish this as soon as possible. This is one of the BEST AU Star Wars fics I have ever read. Are you doing it right? ABSOLUTELY! Please, please keep writing. Your grasp of the character of Anakin/Vader is amazing. This is the guy slaughtered younglings and the temple and went home and kissed his wife. You have got it right!
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  • From ANON - Anthony on November 10, 2005
    Wow. This is one the darkest, if not THE darkest Vader fic I've ever read. I sympathized with him at first, but he's quickly proven just how depraved and evil the depths of the dark side truly are. If there's anyone I feel truly sorry for, it's Si-Nia. It's a wonder she hasn't killed herself yet after such a horrific ordeal. I think Vader's far from done with her; he wouldn't have given her back her children unless he intends to make an example out of them.

    Padme's in for a nasty surprise if Obi-Wan's plan is to send her to distract Vader. Vader's irredeemable at this point, and once he learns she's been conspiring with the Jedi to hide her children, he's gonna go ballistic. I wouldn't be surprised if he really killed her this time. I know this story is centered around Vader, but I hope Obi-Wan finds a way to succeed in his mission. Or that at least he or Padme can help Si-Nia escape from that hell. Or maybe they can all conspire to kill Vader, for everything he's done to them.

    For the most part, your writing's been excellent so far. The battle scene was a little short (I expected more from a Sith who put upa tremendous fight against Yoda), but that's a minor quibble, and Palpatine was just part of the plot. The real focus is on Vader here, and you're doing a great job of that. It's dark and scary, but very well written. Keep going with it.
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  • From ANON - me on November 09, 2005
    I never review these stories but Oh my gosh I had to review this one.
    You have succeeded in making each persons emotions come jumping out of the page at you. I can almost grab Vader's anger with my hand. That is awesome to me. Thanks for being such an excellent writer.

    Oh and can I beg you to please not stop writing Time Retreating. I read that one last night and I did not think it was wierd. It is awesome. It sent chills up and down my back.
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  • From ANON - jeannie on November 09, 2005
    ohhh boyb this is getting good.l write more
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  • From ANON - Linwe_Amari on November 09, 2005
    Great chapter! Update soon!
    ~Katie
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  • From ANON - doloris on November 09, 2005
    She finally reunited with her children, that's so cute. It seems to me that Anakin/Vader has a change of heart a little
    bit. You're doing an awesome job, please update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - dmitchell on November 08, 2005
    This story is so awesome. I absolutely love it. Can't wait to see what Vader does to Si-Nia. I have a feeling it won't be anything nice.
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  • From ANON - doloris on November 08, 2005
    I am so glad that he killed his master, but I am more scared of what he will do to the slave girl.
    I hope he has mercy for her. Love the story, please update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - kate on November 08, 2005
    I love the way you portray the characters. I'm glad (I can't remember her name) isn't stupid enough to fall in love with her rapist. Her emotions are very vividly portrayed and realistic, as are Vaders. I feel so sorry for them both, even though he's despicable.

    I especially loved the last few chapters. Bye-bye, Emperor Palpatine. I'm glad Anakin/Vader killed him-and I like how it was partially in revenge and partially to save his son.
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  • From ANON - LaPapillion on November 07, 2005
    This is an amazing story. I just can not express in words the emotions I am feeling. Raw, tense and potent.
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  • From ANON - DoLoris on November 06, 2005
    I love this story!!! Please update!
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  • From ANON - jeannie on November 02, 2005
    oh my god... he is going to find luke!! does that mean that he will kill owen and baru? oh i cant wait for you to update!! i absolutely love this story, it is definitely one of the best star wars fan fics!
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