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Reviews for Love at Sea

By : JustCallMeCaptain
  • From Kimmie on January 06, 2007
    Just one other thing i would like to suggest for posting requirements. Read the requirements set out by opportune moment. They are a second person point of view fan fiction site and the requirements are good to follow for any story. The link is http://www.opportunemoment.net/submissions.html

    It explains also a bit more about what i was trying to say in my last post about text talk
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  • From Kimmie on January 06, 2007
    I have to say i am quite disappointed with this. Not that its a bad story. Just the spelling mistakes and grammar. Also i hate to say it but the best way to ruin a story is to use text talk. dont use w/ when you want to say with. i mean u dont tlk like this in r/l do u? Im not trying to be mean, i love the story line so far, but you need to use word or notepad and fix up your mistakes before posting.

    Lady Linwe
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  • From ANON - Onitsu on December 23, 2006
    Good start, but go back and get rid of the short hand like b/c and stuff. But other than that you have a good beginner for a story here.
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  • From ANON - H on November 10, 2005
    I'm sorry I really wanted to read your story, but the terrible spelling and mis-use of words wouldn't let me. ruff? rough and so on. I wish I could read it, I really do.
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