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Reviews for Freddy's fuckbuddy.

By : Onitsu
  • From ANON - thraxlover on January 07, 2007
    when come's the next chapter?
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  • From ANON - Wormy on July 16, 2006
    Really nice story. I like it alot. I hope to see another chapter. ;)
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  • From ANON - Alisha on December 06, 2005
    please continue with the story!! you left me hangin! lol its great so far
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  • From ANON - WaterLily on September 24, 2005
    Wow. This is good. The only thing I see wrong with it is that you occasionally switch from first-person perspective to third-person perspective. Stick with one, because it's hard to read a story that has 'me' and 'I' to 'she' and 'her'. I'd like to see more though. I'm liking Oni, she's a cool demoness.

    BTW, thanks for reviewing my story. It's in the (very slow) progress of being updated. Once I complete Chapter 7, eight will also be ready to post. (Two in one. Yay!) Hope to see Chapter 2, soon.

    WaterLily
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