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Reviews for One and Two and Three

By : simmons
  • From ANON - megara on January 14, 2007
    well that sucks. i will keep my eyes out for an update

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  • From ANON - possessed-gummy-bear-inferno on December 17, 2006
    What!? NO!!! It can't end after that last chapter!!! How...how could you! *grabs two's mug and attempts to bang it on head of author*
    I will beg and grovel on hands and knees. This story is fantastic and I would hate for it not to be updated.
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  • From ANON - Possessed-Gummy-Bear-Inferno on July 05, 2006
    No No NO! It just can't end like that...that...CLIFFHANGER! *starts slamming head into various walls*
    Anyways, I personally think that the underwear designs are hilarious. I loved the blue and red pill one. haha!
    Now if only people can start making them...*shifty eyes* .>
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  • From ANON - Possessed-Gummy-Bear-Inferno on July 05, 2006
    A whole barrel of popcorn and a king sized crunch bar couldn't have made this story any better/. I believe chpt 4 is my favorite so far. LOVED the randomness.
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  • From ANON - Possessed-Gummy-Bear-Inferno on July 05, 2006
    Wow. Chapter three just seemed so serious, but it ended with a toothpick. What.The.Hell... That was bloody awesome!
    (scampers off to read more)
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  • From ANON - Lunitari on September 28, 2005
    Ah! you wrote more!
    I'm so happy that I could build a statue in your honor, ok maybe not, but be certain that I'm really pleased by your work.
    I love everything about it (I'm such a sucker...).
    I'm surprised that I am the only one who reviewed, come on people this is a great story!
    Anyway, I'll be waiting your next update, trying to figure out what will happen to Keyes and the Twins (got to love them).

    So, see you next chapter!
    Lunitari

    P.S. One more thing, if you need help writing things in French, it's my first language. So it would be my pleasure.

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  • From ANON - lunitari on September 24, 2005
    mmm, where should I begin...
    First, I really like the twins.
    Second, they're not alot of stories about them who are not pwp.
    Third, I like the way you put the girl in the story, and I also like the way the three caracters interact.
    I could continue....but an other chapter would be great.

    Don't stop the good work.
    Lunitari
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