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Reviews for The Goblin Kings Women

By : SilkenPetal
  • From ANON - Lina on September 21, 2005
    I liked these two chapters.... but I vote for love. Reading use and abuse (no matter the type) is a really sickening thought. The second chapter was well written, the first chapter was a bit odd. It started out from 2nd person or 3rd (basically one of those is telling it as a narrator as if it already happened, or telling it like a narrator as it IS happening. You started it with as if it were happening.) then you switched to first person (from the characters pov. Okay, I could have mixed up which number means what but what I mean to say is you started it one way then switched to another) so it was kinda a bit confusing. Otherwise the second chapter was great. Very well done, nummy too. Good luck writing the rest.
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  • From EvilKittenn on September 20, 2005
    Oh... nice update. *looks around* But you gotta make him love her right?? I mean, I guess you dont but after all that?

    I guess I really do like where your going with this and I can't wait for another update.

    Kittenn
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  • From ANON - Angel on September 17, 2005
    Nice start! Just so you know though change your "than" to "then." There are two that are used improperly =) Good job!
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  • From ANON - Amalthea on September 13, 2005
    Ooh...I love it... ::drools:: Your Jareth is so DELICIOUSLY evil. And I wonder what you are implying with the title "The Goblin Kings WOMEN". Please don't stop now!
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  • From ANON - Lady Moon on September 12, 2005
    I like how it starts out and can be very shur that whatever you do with this, it will be an enjoyeble and interesting read!
    Please update as soon as you can!!!!
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  • From ANON - Jennie on September 11, 2005
    please finished this story everything you write i read so please write something very good in the next chapter soon.
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  • From ANON - Me on September 10, 2005
    I really loved this one - please continue? It's delightfully dark =)
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  • From ANON - Aquis-S on September 08, 2005
    love it so far! keep writing! ^^
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  • From ANON - gingersnap1993 on September 08, 2005
    Me like very much. I'm very interested in seeing how this developes. Great start to the challenge!
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  • From ANON - Kat on September 08, 2005
    I love it! Keep writing more!
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  • From ANON - serpentlady on September 07, 2005
    a very nice start. your story contrasts nicely to the one begun by Evilkitten. I eagerly await to read what you both come up with. I noticed how you were able to keep Sarah's reactions innocent enough for a young girl, yet knowledgeable enough for a teenage who has most probably gone through sex ed. Great Job!
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  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on September 07, 2005
    It's an interesting start but I do have one complaint. You started this story in third person perspective and then switched to first person. This is extremely confusing, please pick one and stick with it.
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  • From ANON - arava on September 07, 2005
    I really liked the way you described the flow of emotions she felt when the Goblin King walked through her. That was really creative. Update soon, I can't wait to read more. :)
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  • From ANON - eryn on September 05, 2005
    So far so good, looking forward to seeing where you take it.
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  • From EvilKittenn on September 05, 2005
    Oh... man.. nice start. You will have to read mine... lol. We can be eachother's cheer groups. I like the detail and I like the harshness.
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