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Reviews for Minion.

By : Gevaisa
  • From LadyVoorhees on July 08, 2009
    Wow, this is beyond amazing writing, it's exquisite! I should have been in bed 4 hours ago! I can't stop reading it! I just finished chapter 8 and will finish reading it tommorrow! Keep up the good work! Written very well I like how you describe everything just enough and do the flash backs that help explain everything. I love how well developed your characters and well everything is! I can tell you put alot of effort into this. I love Doom! If i could I'd hug you!
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  • From lunasagalle on March 10, 2008
    You have truly found yourself a new fan - I am absolutely amazed by your style of writing and the intertextual connections you create. I stumbled upon this story by chance, and didn't at first think I'd like it, but I was completely hooked after about three paragraphs. I love the way you present Doom. Although I haven't understood every single detail (I know the movie - and that's about it), you somehow make this world accessible.

    Keep going!
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  • From ANON - Kaetti on September 26, 2006
    Outstanding work! Real, and exactly what I would like superheros to do! Thanks for the wonderful read!
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  • From ANON - Raven Firedragon on December 26, 2005
    This is amazing! A well thought out and detailed piece. The philosophy of making the world mudane when super-powers are rampant is fascinating and you deal with it very, very, well. I commend you for also creating a heroine who is plausible, interesting, likable and not a mary-sue.

    ~R.

    P.S. The smut is also stirring indeed.
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  • From ANON - Thornwitch on September 24, 2005
    Wait! It's over? Damn it! Loved the ending, by the way. Although I kind of felt like Doom was a little too reasonable about the whole "obey" thing. I guess that could just be relief, coupled "ahem" with the extra mellowness of actually gettting some for a change.... By the way, didn't he have a thing for Sue Richards? Is that why he called her shallow?

    I totally still want to know why Richards thought J shouldn't marry Doom, and I trust that it's something good and jucy. Oh, and is there going to be the obligatory Marvel wedding-crash by superpowered beings? I guess it would be more unusual if there wasn't and instead there were peculiar Romany customs. Maybe Latveria has quaint folk dancing? With bells on?

    I really, really can't wait for the sequel.

    By the way, any hope of a oneshot or two from your other stories on this site?
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 22, 2005
    I saw "The End", and panicked in that split second before I continued reading. I'm so glad this will continue in a sequel!
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  • From ANON - Rosy the Cat on September 21, 2005
    Aww, it's over. Darnit.

    Yay, sequel!

    -- Rosy the Cat
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  • From ANON - Lixta on September 19, 2005
    Yes, many questions answered! I love Joviana, and the still-developing dynamic between she and Victor.
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  • From ANON - Rosy the Cat on September 18, 2005
    Great chapter! I'm looking forward to the next one.

    I take it that whatever Mr. Fantastic was spazzy about has nothing to do with the prophesy, so I eagerly anticipate learning just what that is in future chapters. As to the portrayal of women in comics, I shall do my part by having a serious discussion with my older brother, who plans on going into either comics or cartoons after attending Cal Arts, which he'll be applying to after he gets his AA degree.

    -- Rosy the Cat
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  • From ANON - Sandy on September 15, 2005
    I Love this story! I leep checking back every day or so to check on Minion. It's just so good.

    Thank you!
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  • From ANON - Lixta on September 15, 2005
    I'm very entertained by the interactions between Joviana and Doom. Re the prophecy- Doom already knows of it, so I expect that will be another thing they will discuss. But it makes me think of Joviana's comment, "I was trying to move the world, with Latveria as my place to stand, and Doom as my lever…" Makes me wonder what exactly her plan *is*. And the prophecy itself is rather unspecific, isn't it? Doom's marriage will lead to the end of the world as we know it. Ack! I can't help speculating about what that may mean.
    Wonderful! Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Rosy the Cat on September 15, 2005
    Your welcome, and thanks, I'm rather fond of it for all I've been using it since I was 10.

    As for the whole super-figure thing, maybe all potential super women are born with naturally-strong back muscles? But how would that explain the way they go running and jumping everywhere. Wouldn't that *hurt*? Jiggle-factor stinks. Furthermore, how come when a super woman is all sweaty, they look like wet swimsuit models, with absolutely no other sign of being over-heated?

    Loved the chapter, and I'm rather curious about Magneto's motivations as well. Do they have something to do with what Reed Richards was going to warn Joviana about? Also, I liked how Victor hit Magneto smart and where it would really hurt as his first strike. It says alot about how alike the lovebirds think, or, you know, just how much of an influence she's been on his way of thinking.

    -- Rosy the Cat

    P.S.: I also adore Dear Professor Xavier/Happy Phantom and If Music Be The Food Of Love! You rock.
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  • From ANON - Rosy the Cat on September 13, 2005
    Though, I have noticed the whole male artists obsessed with making the heroines and villianesses look like super models. More like Barbies on steroids; honnestly...

    -- Rosy the Cat
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  • From ANON - Rosy the Cat on September 13, 2005
    Okay, I've been following the story for a while now--love it to bits, by the way; first found it through ff.net--and am finally feeling guilty enough to get off my tush and review. It's a really interesting story, even beyond the smut--you bring up all of these questions about comic book heroes and villians that would have never occured to me otherwise, and I heartily thank you for that. Yay Gevaisa!

    -- Rosy the Cat
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  • From ANON - Lixta on September 12, 2005
    I'm really enjoying this. 'costumed adventurers'-- hee! Joviana's comments about that are very amusing.
    I'm curious about how she defended herself on the island, but I'm more curious about how her relationship with Doom is progressing. Will he address her admission of love? Will Joviana promise to 'obey'? Will they have more kinky sex?
    Looking forward to more!
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