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Reviews for Time Retreating

By : Ladykohl
  • From ANON - Haden on September 03, 2005
    Very interesting. It's a very original idea you have here. Hopefully you'll keep it that way and wont fall in to the same routine as a lot of other padme/anakin writers have. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - kitten1981 on September 02, 2005
    Excellent chapter. Really great i cannot wait for you to go on i know what happens next yet i cannot wait to find out through yours
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  • From ANON - LaPapillion on September 02, 2005
    This is a breathtakingly beautiful story. Truly amazing!
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  • From ANON - Dru on September 01, 2005
    Good for you for continuing it. You've got a backbone, I like that. I'm very interested to see where you take this now. Good job.
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  • From ANON - Laurachan (currently not logged in) on September 01, 2005
    No, don't delete this story! I like it very much, it's original and interesting: I like a dark Anakin and I can't wait to read more!
    Please keep going ^^
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  • From ANON - Laurachan (currently not logged in) on September 01, 2005
    No, don't delete this story! I like it very much, it's original and interesting: I like a dark Anakin and I can't wait to read more!
    Please keep going ^^
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  • From ANON - eridani on September 01, 2005
    You are right- Part 2 has some of the best written material in this story so far.

    God, dont shut down this story! Please! Believe me, this is far better than the majority of illicit A/P material out there. In fact, I'm really quite enjoying reading this story- and I'm glad your writing is coming at a pretty steady pace (regular updates are just the best thing in the world). How did the 'love' scene, as you put it, go? I thought it worked very well and considering it's the first time you've written that sort of thing, a really excellent effort.

    The evolutin of Pernea to Padme worked very well- and I thought the quote at the beginning of Part 2 was especially effective in that change. It immediately made me consider the "dreams" as rememberances, though you hadn't explicitly made that point yet.

    Great work so far- I can't wait to see what you do with this, and I hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - Darthiamwickedcool on September 01, 2005
    Thank you for continuing~you have more fans than you realize :)
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  • From ANON - kitten1981 on August 31, 2005
    Good I cannot wait to see next where you go. Earlier i saw what you wrote and was dissappointed. Glad you are going to keep going
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  • From ANON - eridani on August 30, 2005
    I'm intrigued! Unfortunately well written stories with actual evident plots are hard to come by around here, but I think this one is definitely going to be one of them. The sense of anticipation in the prologue was handled well, and I liked how Padme and her ?reincarnated? personality evolved smoothly in the first chapter. Hope you update this soon, because it would be a shame for a good quality story like this to go unfinished.
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  • From ANON - kitten1981 on August 29, 2005
    Blue Chance,
    Very interesting though admittingly I wish it was a more clear that last part i hope you continue cause i will be looking
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  • From ANON - Caz on August 28, 2005
    I like this - a very different angle. Keep it going. I'm hooked :)
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  • From ANON - Gem on August 27, 2005
    Very intriguing! Keep it coming!
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