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Reviews for Car Talk

By : mandm
  • From AoiOcelot on July 19, 2009
    This was very well written. It's long and has lots of detail.
    There were only a few grammatical errors.
    Overall, very well done!
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  • From psychosaturn on June 21, 2008
    *wants a cigarette and doesn't even smoke*

    If their first time was this hot, just think of how good it'll be once they're used to each other. GUH.
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  • From wanderingaddict on June 10, 2008
    haha, wow! this is so good, you've drawn an amazing relationship between the two guys. I really think it's close to fantastic!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 25, 2006
    this is the third or fourth time i've read this and it's still just as amazing
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 18, 2006
    omg that was one of the hottest stories i've ever read. this is the third time i've read it because it's so good and i wanted to tell you it's an extremely
    wonderful work of art, perfectly blending true love and eroticism.
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  • From ANON - Nina on December 15, 2005
    I haven't even watched the movie. I loved this little story between them. So flirty, and the body language. I really liked it when he said, "your first time wasn't with a girl." Plus, when Johnny cheeks flushed. Now that was really sweet. I was really hoping that there would be more chapter to this story. I really would like to read them. I loved it. Thank you.
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  • From ANON - Canbelyn on August 25, 2005
    Great Story! Really Hot! And I must say that I did not think of them as a pair. But I do now!

    C
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  • From ANON - Viv on August 24, 2005
    I loooove this fic! It's so sweet, yet you did such a great job with the sex! :D You should really write another one, and if you have a Vic/Reed fic, pleeeease post it! *swings pendulum* You are getting sleepy, you will post it... Anyways, great job on this one!
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  • From ANON - Gordon on August 23, 2005
    Never thought about these two together before but it totally walked - gentle and passionate at once. Ace. :)
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  • From ANON - M #2 on August 23, 2005
    I LOVE US M #1!!! x3 Bwahahaha. You did a good job catching most of our errors. I'm looking at my typos, like, "JEEZ MAN I SUCK LIEK WOAH". x3 Yay for prose style RP and it's easy-to-convert-ness.

    XD Whadditiz, yo.

    Johnny says, "Hey Benny next time don't scream down my throat!"
    XD i had totally forgotten how much lube they used. xD like. Tons. xD Which is probably a good thing. We should so post Vik and Reed. xD Because Viktor is not so much with the lube. xD Less sticky, I guess.

    :B ZOMG THIS IS TEH BESTZOR FICZOR EVORZORZOR

    Or something. x3
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  • From ANON - Cleta on August 23, 2005
    This was a great story.I always wondered how it would be for Ben to have sex.And with Johnny-that's just the icing on the cake.Loved it!!
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