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Reviews for Balancing the Scales

By : Morrigan
  • From ANON - Apricot the Gerbil on September 14, 2006
    [tunnels in, still winded from the last story] Oh, hey, and that's right, they've both got SUITS on in this one! Woohoo-- score one personal kink jackpot for the Gerbil!

    >Then he planned on fucking Crane against a wall until he screamed.>

    ...Mmm.

    Oh-- nice tempo, too, coasting off from a big paragraph with a punchy line like that, too. (Still, mmm.)

    >Only Bruce Wayne would be stupid enough to do that.>

    Like that line, too...

    >He unleashed the rolling grin that had melted scores of exotic supermodels and at least a couple district attorneys.>

    Heh, nice callback to Two-Face there!

    >Bruce cocked an amused eyebrow. “Do you get cold easy?”
    “I like layers,” Jonathan said, his eyes hooded with desire and contempt.
    “Me too.”>

    Crane isn't the only one who can wield a bit of wordplay, I see. [smirk]

    >The doctor had the eyes of a predator despite having the perfect body of prey.>

    Wow. That sums up a great deal of movie!Crane's character, right there. Just _nails_ it.

    The sex scene in this one is good, too. No messing around with the purple prose a lot of guy/guy fics can easily get bogged down in-- just good ol' fucking, with a masterful happy-medium of play-by-play and dialogue to keep it alive. Not even mentioning Scarecrow's easily-in-character thing for biting and snarling orders once he's (debatably) got the upper hand, and how those orders are to show his own body no mercy... This is one great 'topping from the bottom' example you've written, here!

    >caramel voice>

    Ooh. Nice word choice.
    All in all, I like how both of them end up "winning," in the end.
    [collapses with that, spent for the night]
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  • From ANON - Rae on November 07, 2005
    "Today he would let himself be Bruce Wayne, a man used to indulging in the finer aspects in life. He’d allow himself to wallow in Jonathan’s beauty, to explore his body and show the doctor that he wasn’t just an animal.

    Then he planned on fucking Crane against a wall until he screamed."



    That is the single sexiest thing I've ever read. Keep up the awesome work; please write more!
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  • From ANON - Katherine on August 21, 2005
    abso-frekaing-lutely genius!!!!!!!!!!!!
    keep keep keep writing
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 20, 2005
    I love this series. You simply have to continue. And be as evil as evilly possible to Johnathon! He's a sick little bunny he can take it.
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  • From ANON - Taylor on August 20, 2005
    Oooooh, yes, sir!!
    Please write more!! This is sooooo hot!! :)

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  • From ANON - wabbitsox on August 20, 2005
    this made me so happy! Can't wait for more.
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