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Reviews for Open Your Eyes

By : amistillill
  • From ANON - chippi on August 20, 2005
    hey, i liked the story, are u gonna continue it? if u do update soon, lol. :)
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  • From ANON - Ebony on August 19, 2005
    I really, really enjoyed this piece, it had such wonderful emotion in it and good characterization. You conveyed the feelings and emotions perfectly without the help of much dialogue, which I've always found a talent worth praising. If you can think of a title for this, I'd like to publish it - but only with your permission, naturally - on our site called 'Opportune Moment' (http://www.opportunemoment.net), a site that hosts only Jack/You fiction.

    Excellent work!
    //Ebony
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  • From ANON - crooke on August 19, 2005
    I love your you/jack stories! your last one was amazing I wanted it to go on forever (im still crossing my fingers for a continuance) this one looks promising as well!, please , more, lol.
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  • From ANON - Line on August 17, 2005
    Wow! Screw the R rating, this was absolutely beautiful! I repeat...wow!
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  • From ANON - Mya on August 16, 2005
    No, don't worry about the R-rating, it worked the way you wrote it. I couldn'tve imagined her going through with it at that moment, her feeling the way she was feeling. I hope it does eventually happen though, Jack is perfect for her erasing the evil fiance. ;) Hope you continue, you have a great writing style that flows easily.
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  • From ANON - Aliya on August 15, 2005
    Wow, this is just as good as your other Pirates of the Caribbean story! Thank you!
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