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Reviews for Fading into the light

By : darkangel985
  • From ANON - Morningstar on November 25, 2005
    Oh, I love the part about the baby - "Don't fight.". I can just hear it. That was a vulnerable and cute moment. Think we can safely say he's inherited his parents' powers and are gonna be powerful.
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  • From ANON - loner654 on November 17, 2005
    Yet amother wonderful chapter. I think thats Luci's plans are helping Johnny and Bally to get more in touch with each other you know? And oh boy you had me on the edge of my seat when Chaz got shot. I forgot for a moment there he was an angel and I surely thought he died but then he fixes himself lol And poor Angela had to learn the hard way. I think I found it really sweet how much love and affection the two lovers were showing to each other. This scene was really suspenseful and romantic. And that is one smart baby they have in their hands, if it could send danger from inside the womb (do guys have wombs? o.o lol). I really enjoyed that chapter just like the other ones, but I still can't get over the whole chocolate steak ordeal lol I am loving this even more and you are able to make any lil excuse just for the two to have sex. LOL they are really sweet! Great job luv! Oh and for the last review, no prob, you earned it luv. Have some chocolate muffins and steak lol
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  • From ANON - mirage on November 15, 2005
    Yay! Every chapter better than the previous. You're great for updating so fast. Continue soon!!!
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  • From ANON - loner654 on November 13, 2005
    Hey there, luv! Sorry for not reviewing last chapter. I was away at an emergency meeting with my job so it was a suddent thing. But great job on these last two chapters. Angela reall needs to find herself a new hobby that does not emvolve Johnny lol really is more like "He is mine and mine only" OI she really needs to shut up about that lol anyway i could not stop laughing over the last chapter when John had cum on his face. I could just imgaine that right now lol. Bally is so bad and chaz is not helping lol but i find it bloody hilarious. Anyway, that was some major Angela bashing lol. Good smut scene! I like it can't wait for your next update. Oh, and angela? don;t you dare hurt Bally! *smiles evilly* ^_^
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  • From ANON - mirage on November 09, 2005
    Yay! Another day, another chapter. Can't wait to see what happens so update, ok?
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  • From ANON - mirage on October 31, 2005
    I'm glad you updated again. Can't wait to see how your story ends! Great work. Continue soon!!!
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  • From ANON - mirage on October 31, 2005
    I'm glad you updated again. Can't wait to see how your story ends! Great work. Continue soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Tierchen on October 27, 2005
    Now it´s about time the baby starts kicking!!!! That would be awesome, great new update girl!
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  • From ANON - Marevas on October 27, 2005
    I love it!!!
    Keep going!
    You have officially made me a John/Bally fan.
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  • From ANON - Loki on October 25, 2005
    He's going for Angela isn't he? ISN'T HE? Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah! Stupid bitch die die! *Calms down* I don't know whether to worship or be disgusted with you for the chocolate steaks...I mean...they're steaks! But then again...it's Bally! *Sigh* Caught between my love for both. And the punishment scene was so cute! Gotta love it! But I wanna know what the baby's gonna be! Can't ya tell me? Can't ya give me a hint? Please? Well, I've decided I'm rooting for a girl at the moment, because that would just be sweet beyond words. Glad you liked the names - if ya need any more don't hesitate to ask.
    Brilliant as always!

    ~Loki
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  • From ANON - loner654 on October 25, 2005
    ^_^;; sorry for all those mistakes in that last review luv. It is too late at night and i'm half asleep lol anyway again good job can;t wait for ya next update
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  • From ANON - loner654 on October 25, 2005
    o_o;; raw steak and chocolate syrup? what kind of cravings are these? lol wow i wonder how the child is taking it in well luved luved luved like always luv. Excellent job like always and I think I already know who is going to be part of Luci's plot (cough...ang...cough choke) anyway I would say Luci to die but I kind of like seeing his plans foil lol its just too funny And very lovely couple this is turning out to be they akready became one of my favrites. Excellent job on keeping the smut up and that is really funny that Bally still wants ti get punished like that. When i was reading the last part, I kept on picturing Luci throwing a tantrum like a lil boy who didn;t get his camdy wailing on the floor, LOL very funny thanks for your hard work in all this, luv
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  • From ANON - mirage on October 24, 2005
    Great new chapter. This story is really getting interesting. Anyways, you better keep updating for the readers' sakes. Keep up the good work!
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  • From scarydorable on October 24, 2005
    Fantastic stuff. Keep going.
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  • From ANON - mirage on October 22, 2005
    Thanks lots for updating. Continue soon!!!
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