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Reviews for Fading into the light

By : darkangel985
  • From ANON - Zex on September 20, 2012
    WOA, I'm digging in! Your smut is surely delicious. Lucky, I discovered such a good story.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 31, 2007
    nice
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  • From ANON - memmem on August 30, 2007
    i like this story but i think the transitions between them fighting or battle scenes and stuff (especially in showdown) to them having sex need a lot of work. it's just not logic. I also think that there's so much smut in here that it makes it all less special. and the parts where you've caps locked Bally in johns orgasm induced fits are too much. caps lock in a sex scene ruins it.
    just a bit of adviese n i hope you don't take it the wrong way.
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  • From ANON - tesla on August 30, 2007
    love it
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  • From Viany on May 03, 2007
    "Can't stop reading, over and over again, this is so well written." - OperaKing101
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  • From ANON - NewJay on July 09, 2006
    I loved it ^^~ You should do more mpregs, Maybe on of John/Cass? anyway good stuff ^_^~
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  • From ANON - mirage on December 22, 2005
    Good job at finishing the story. I enjoyed it a lot and I definetly think a sequel is a good idea.
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  • From ANON - Val on December 19, 2005
    I looooved it.
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  • From ANON - loner654 on December 19, 2005
    *applause* Wonderful dear just wonderful! It was great being there fromt the start of your story and all the way to the end! I really enjoyed the lot! Pretty sad that it had to end but all good things must come to an end as they say. Thank you for providing such a wonderful sotry and I will try to see your other stories. This was just magnificent and extremely adorable. Wonderful job luv. Keep your head up high and your talent strong. Hope to here from you once more.

    Your reviewer,
    loner654
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  • From ANON - loner654 on December 18, 2005
    Is everything all right, sweetie? I hope it is haven't heard from you in a while now.
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  • From ANON - do i really need a name? on December 16, 2005
    woooooh! need ing updates!!!
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  • From ANON - Pinklady on December 09, 2005
    huuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrry please...
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  • From ANON - Val on November 30, 2005
    Yay for replies! lol. I didn't mean to rush you or anything, especially if you're in school and you have other priorties before updating awesome bally/john slash. But thanks for letting me know. I get impatient a little too fast. Forgive me for wanting to read stories like 24/7. i blame this fandom. =) Good chapter *especially the sex* cough.
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  • From ANON - Val on November 27, 2005
    i've been reading this fic without reviewing & i'm hoping my review and the other reviews will encourage you to write some more, or at least try to update soon. this is a great fanfic, probably one of the top five bestest B/C fics i've ever read. you've got the characters personalities down pat and the dialogue seems like it's pulled straight from the movie.
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  • From ANON - loner654 on November 27, 2005
    O_O wow i see them not ever fighting again. The first part was really sweet but then the child became kind of freaky lol jk the baby just does not want the parents to fight. But wow amazing power if the baby can do that inside of bally. I wonder how this baby will really look you know? I think it would look rather interesting since its going to be half demon and half human. But wonderful job on the chapter luv. I luved it! Damn those pregnant urgencies, they make the pregant one all horny all the time. All John wants is sleep , I know how that feels. LOL So anyway, good job on it and can't wait for your next update. And here is some mil for those muffins ^_^
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