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Reviews for The Trace Which Remains

By : theskywolves
  • From ANON - Rena aka MystWynd on July 12, 2006
    Wow it's been awhile since this fic was updated. It would be such a shame if this were to remain unfinished because it's going so well. You have a very nice smooth and easy writing style. The fic is a very gripping read. Please let me know if you think you'll be continuing TTWR. I haven't been able to find very many Anakin/Luke fics out on the net, or maybe I'm not looking in the right places. But this story... It's good
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  • From ANON - Yukia L. on January 30, 2006
    Please update soon, this story is soo good, and also because its hard to find good or any for that matter Luke/Anakin fics.....ah the said and powerful truth....
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  • From ANON - Marie on December 26, 2005
    In the story before Anakin never actually took Luke, so techniqally he never took Lukes virginity. So when Luke boasts about him letting his father take him, he's actually wrong. The Emperor took his virginity though rape. That is unless you consider any sexual activity as losing your virginity? Then wouldn't anyone who's ever kissed someone else be a virgin????
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  • From ANON - dregonicewing35 on December 01, 2005
    Please hurry up and post the next chapter I love this story Was it kenobi and yoda who pushed Ani to the land of the living
    dregonicewing35
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  • From ANON - Ladynaye on November 30, 2005
    THAT WAS HOT!! Explicit and HOT HOT HOT!!
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  • From ANON - vanessa on November 16, 2005
    awesome!!! i have loved the first story and I can't wait to read more of this one, please write more soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - Cassie on November 15, 2005
    yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!!!! your back!!! i missed your fanfics soooooo much!! XD
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  • From ANON - Ladynaye on November 15, 2005
    Finally an update!! This is one of my favorite stories online right now. Please update soon, I am hanging by a thread!!
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  • From ANON - pureevil230 on November 11, 2005
    very interesting story.

    hope anakin can get a second chance and that luke is ok.

    UPDATE SOON!


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  • From ANON - Robyn on November 05, 2005
    *heavy sigh* Why won't you update?
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  • From ANON - mae on October 30, 2005
    I love your story. After years of being a star wars fan, I stumbled onto this pairing and noe I'm hooked! Please update real soon, I can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - pris on October 25, 2005
    i love this story and am hooked. i hope you continue because it is too good not to...please write more and soon.
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  • From ANON - Rivana on October 17, 2005
    Now I wish I'd stopped reading at the end of the last story. I don't want more unhappy times I want smut damn it! *pouts*
    Please be kind? Oh and update soon cuz you've snared me in and I need to see what happens, just please a happy ending if nothing else?
    Thanks...
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  • From ANON - Chris (AntarPrince04) on September 26, 2005
    Well jeez, I don't even know where to start. Just....wow.
    This is your first Incest series? Well I must admitt, this has
    to be the Best pair of incest fics I have Ever read and thats
    not an exaggeration!

    I was particularly inpressed with EGS. You... That was just a
    work of art! Chapter 1 and 2 specifically were excellent. I cried
    through the whole thing, but those two Chapters... Anakin's pain
    and termoil was Just so palpable.

    All together, I have to say that you capture the true essence of
    not only Star Wars, but Incest fics as well with these Fics. In TWR
    I love the fact that you give them the Relationship that they Yern
    for, but at the same time you stay with the Father/son angle. Thats
    an important part in fics like these. To often Authors abandon the blood
    relation part of it, and that can be detrimental to a fics quality. One must not
    be afraid to assert some form of dominance over the secondary character, Luke
    in this Instance.

    I noticed as I read that you often stated that Most of the fic, more accuratly
    EGS that alot of it would not be consentual. To that I would say that while
    it is impotand to assert Domanince in a Father/son intemate relationship, an
    author shouldn't shy away from the Sintual angle. That sintuality is inportant
    as well. It is very important to have a solid foundation of both in an incest fic.

    Once again, work of art and I truly hope you continue.
    Chris
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  • From ANON - LadyVADAR on August 23, 2005
    So happy to see an update on the story. I have to admit when I saw the pairing in the first story, I was kind hesitant to read it yet intrigued so I read it and wow was I hooked. Now, I can't wait to see the redemptation of Anakin and how it unfolds

    take care

    toodles
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