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Reviews for The Mirror of Osiris

By : darkangel985
  • From ANON - Stixx on September 08, 2005
    Yay! You updated! *dances*
    Fantastic work!

    Two horny men in a small enclosed cave...can it get even better?*grins smugly*
    Well I hope so. ^.^

    Can't wait for your next chapter! Keep going please! :)
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  • From ANON - Munnin on September 06, 2005
    Brillant! My god you're good! I'm dying to know what happens next. I'm really impressed with the way you handle the mutual desire of the two men.
    Looking forward to reading more.
    Munnin
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  • From ANON - Loki on September 05, 2005
    WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH! *Screams in delight* I got a special thank you! And a gorgeous little UST scene! You are absolutely the most amazing writer ever! *Beams happily and smooches her Ardeth and Rick dolls together* Wonderful.

    ~Loki
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  • From ANON - Loki on September 01, 2005
    Cave? As in a small enclosed space sort-of cave? As in Rick and Ardeth in a small enclosed space? I'm liking where you're going with this...lol, and the crocodiles were good too. Keep up the fab work *waves pom-poms*

    ~Loki
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  • From arianea on August 31, 2005
    Don't have time to continue on to chapter 9 just now, just wanted to say thank you! Nefertiri's POV was, appropriately, sad and creepy, and I feel so bad for Rick and Alex. Evy really appears to be lost to them. Keep up the good work!

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  • From ANON - Morningstar on August 26, 2005
    Yay! Rick/Ardeth bonding. *happy-dance* Not really that much to comment on in this one, but a beautiful moment between two vulnerable men none the less. I can't wait to see how Ardeth will handle the medjai-counsel's insitence on marriage. If you're planning on adding it that is..
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  • From ANON - Stixx on August 26, 2005
    I Like your story!
    Hope you'll update it soon.
    Can't wait to find out what you planned next!!!^____^
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  • From ANON - Loki on August 26, 2005
    Woohoo, bye bye Alex and Jonathan, hello Rick and Ardeth alone together! I can see the smut on the horizon. Great job.

    ~Loki
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  • From ANON - Morningstar on August 26, 2005
    Oh, they're all alone in the desert.. I sense romance moving our way.
    Who/what are the Nile's fiercest warriors, and who are the people/creatures who slay them?
    It seems Rick is starting to accept his wife's demise. Like he's hardening himself for the possibility that he may have to place a bullet in her.
    Actually I'm not to much against Jonathan and Alex. In the movies Alex would probably have found some way to sneak off the boat and Jonathan would have had to follow - trouble following close behind. At least in a medjai-tribe Alex should have many things to explore with his unending curiousity. And Jonathan will probably get himself in trouble with his pick-pocketing and wandering eyes - medjai-women beware. If Nefertiri doesn't kill them the medjais might..
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  • From ANON - Morningstar on August 24, 2005
    Alex and Jonathan as they are. Thinking that it's still worth going unsupervised even if it brings out mummies, the Scorpion King and Anubis' army.. That's just Alex. And Jonathan's light-fingered habits becomes useful once again. And the whole laid-back attitude he has (when he's not screaming and running from mummies etc.)
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  • From ANON - Loki on August 24, 2005
    Am liking lots, though also hankering for more smutty goodness lol....good story so far, very hot.

    ~Loki
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 21, 2005
    I love it. Please Write more. It's really great.
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  • From ANON - Morningstar on August 20, 2005
    Generously feeding crocodiles? Nice touch.
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  • From arianea on August 20, 2005
    I like your story. I specifically appreciate it that although Rick has began to see Ardeth in a different way, he hasn't forgotten or abandoned Evy and still wants to rescue her, nor is he indifferent about what's happened to her. After all they've been through that would be totally unbelievable and also completely out of character, regardless of whether he's falling out of love with Evy or not, and in love/lust someone else.

    I find myself also very curious about Nefertiri - is there anything of Evy left in her? How does she feel about the woman who's body she is now inhabiting? Or Rick and Alex? Hate them? Indifferent? This is just a suggestion, take it or leave it as you see fit, but I'd love to see her POV in a future chapter; I feel it would nicely round out and balance the story.

    I'm very much looking forward to future chapters.

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  • From ANON - Morningstar on August 17, 2005
    Good. Prophetic dreams; at one point he might have to choose who to save? Just asking..
    Suggesting that they wait until Nefertiri find all the keys, is a classic Jonathan moment "Just a suggestion."
    And Rick finally learns that he shouldn't leave Jon and Alex alone. Those who say "The Mummy Returns" know how well that went: Dobble-decker bus. Among other things..
    Rick reacts in usual laid back attitude finding out about Benny.
    They're out trying to save Evy but Jonathan still finds time to examine treasures; another classic Jonathan act. Liked how Ardeth answered the question without having heard it. Putting away treasures or facing the wrath of a ready to kill Medjai.. One would have thought they'd learned not to touch anything in Egyptian tombs by now.
    Ardeth containing from wringing Jonathan's neck; apparently even the Medjai's patience has to run out at some point. But it probably wasn't a good idea to leave Jonathan and Alex alone again..
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