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Reviews for Practical Punishment

By : poisondoll
  • From AoiOcelot on July 19, 2009
    Pretty good, though kinda short.
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  • From xxBritin on July 07, 2008
    Awesome story. I like it.
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  • From ShadowSlayer on June 26, 2007
    Just thought I'd meantion that it looks like someone stole your writing. The following story is written practicly word for word just changing Ben to Sue instead. The writing's so bad it sounds like the person's made Sue a transexual. -_-"

    http://movies.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600090729

    Your story, however, was well written and I really enjoyed it.
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  • From alyssia333 on June 16, 2007
    wow i loved this lol i am a sadistic ^_^ lol there should be kinda sequal after shck thing were ben keeps his promise to get his hot ass again mwuahaha
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  • From ANON - Aidair on December 27, 2006
    Well... That was different. More than two words, yes? I'm not sure if I liked it... Or if I was... What's the word I'm looking for? Didn't quite like it. Hm... The latter but it's not that it wasn't good or anything! It's just that the Thing seems a bit more sweeter to me. If they made a plushie Thing I'd buy him extra large just so I could cuddle properly. The Thing is my favorite Fantastic. *sigh* But the writing wasn't half bad and if you're into that sort of thing then it was awesome too. Well... I gave you about... Ninety Nine words. Cool... More than two... Anyway, great job and I can't say that I didn't hate it... Just wasn't my sort of thing thought I did read to the end... Hmm... I have no idea what to say about that but yeah. Well... I hope you write some more stuff later on or whatever! Until then have a Fan-tas-tic Day!!!
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  • From ANON - Veronica on December 25, 2006
    wow. that was intense. The sick part is I'm into that stuff..I wouldn't want it to happen to me, of course, but I love reading about it. That must've hurt beyond belief. The really sick part is I wish it was a lot more detailed. And I was wondering about this, wouldn't Thing's dick already be permanently hard? I don't know, just a thought. My friend is obssessed with Chris Evans beyond belief, so this'll tear *her* apart. I'll email her the addy rite now. (teehee I"m so weird)
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  • From ANON - HawkSinger on February 07, 2006
    i found this one actually pretty good...*never liked johnny anyways... cocky lil guy* liked things revenge
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  • From ANON - Everharrt on January 05, 2006
    That rocked. Great job. You wanted a review, here it is. And you so right, there needs to be a little domination. Lol.
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  • From ANON - Fatpanda3000 on December 13, 2005
    I love it ^^
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  • From ANON - Alza on November 10, 2005
    Poor johnny!!! Kill Thing!! i really think u should continue this story, please!! i very much enjoyed it.
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  • From ANON - kat f. on October 22, 2005
    Whoa! That was...fantastic! I'd die to read a sequel! Pleeaasseee!! Sequel!
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  • From ANON - Yaoi_guy6739 on October 21, 2005
    It was good. Pretty hot, but a little more detail couldn't hurt. I agree with Prima Donna, Ben and Jhonny > Thing and Jhonny. But overall, pretty decent.
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  • From ANON - ... on October 02, 2005
    Yikes
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  • From ANON - WillowRose on September 12, 2005
    Well...it was a tad sadistic.But a well written sadistic.I liked it. :)
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  • From ANON - Rei Nohara on September 02, 2005
    OK, that was MEAN! Poor Johnny, but... yeah I guess he deserved it. I would have enjoyed a bit of Reed there, but it was fine anyway. One more thing, again: poor Johnny!
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