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Reviews for The Chosen 12

By : voldemort922
  • From ANON - pureevil230 on January 03, 2006
    can't wait for anakin to kick his ass. (palpatin's)

    UPDATE SOON!!!!!
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  • From ANON - HieisShadow on November 08, 2005
    This has a lot of promise. But I suggest to proof read and do some grammer check before you post your chapters. Also, some "***" would be good for scene breaks.

    Either that or get a beta! But this sounds very intresting! So please continue!
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  • From ANON - babydoll786 on August 12, 2005
    I hope you'll able to come back soon I really want to know how this story goes!!
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  • From ANON - joey on August 09, 2005
    Good start. Could you make the chapters longer? Or elaberate a bit more on stuff. This does sound pretty interesting please continue.
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  • From ANON - babydoll786 on August 09, 2005
    Great start!!! Kinda short, but good none the less I can't wait for the update and I'm so glad Anakin will not turn!!!
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