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Reviews for Paper Lantern

By : Closet
  • From ANON - Kitty-Chan on August 20, 2006
    WOW!!!!! this was soooo awsome. it was soo sweet and it had me gigle d and "awwing" pretty much through the whole story. the only thing have to critcize about it that you didn't tell us Will's and Warren's sizes(down there) and you didn't reall ydescribe the orgasm( you know, will saying he felt the hot cum shoot in him, stuff like that) well i hope you write mroe to this story and it wasn't jsut a one shot. please email me if you decide to. my email is pokemonbreederandtrainer2@yaho.com
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  • From ANON - ChiChi on January 20, 2006
    Best. Story. Ever. I LOVE IT!!!! There seriously needs to be more Shy High slash like this. *bows down and grovels* Please! More!!!!
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  • From ANON - Kami Anya on January 05, 2006
    Loved it...Definitely one of the best Sky High fics I've read. You could use a little bit of beta, though...(which, if you'd like, I'd be happy to provide)
    Anywho, I really enjoyed it. Just one question...shouldn't this be in the Sky High section? I'd have loved to have seen this sooner...
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  • From ANON - Kami Anya on January 05, 2006
    Loved it...Definitely one of the best Sky High fics I've read. You could use a little bit of beta, though...(which, if you'd like, I'd be happy to provide)
    Anywho, I really enjoyed it. Just one question...shouldn't this be in the Sky High section? I'd have loved to have seen this sooner...
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  • From ANON - Rose on November 27, 2005
    PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE do another warren/will fic there's not enough of them nd this one is so well writen!
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  • From ANON - xidaer on November 03, 2005
    OMG roxxors! Wowser gee bob that was amazing. just so stunned and wow. Yummy-ness! *calming breath* yes, you totally rock, that was great the whole story just made the end pop out and just be oh so much better than if there had been no plot. much luv!
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  • From ANON - Ronald on October 11, 2005
    Honey, this was INCREDIBLY HOT. I bow before your greatness. A sequel is in the works, yes? XD
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  • From ANON - Rina on September 28, 2005
    Loved it! I agree with you that Warren is THE hottest character in Sky High and I'm happy to have found this charming story. Warren and Will are so adorable together. When you were describing how Warren looked when he came to pick up Will for Homecoming, I just had a huge smile on my face imagining it. I really loved how you used their superpowers before and during the sex scene, especially the image of Warren lighting the candles with little balls of flicked fire. Very cool. Thank you for writing this. Would love to see more.
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  • From Chickalupe on September 19, 2005
    Woah... Must you insist on everything you write being so incredibly hot that I am left reduced to a puddle? I barely have the strength to type this! And, DAMN YOU, I think you have me addicted to yet ANOTHER fandom. Like I needed more pairings to obsess over! But still. Very very very good, as always. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Sean on September 12, 2005
    Holy crap that was great... I liked how you included an actual plot instead of just randomly putting together a sex scene. Mmm... Romantic and hot ^_^
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  • From ANON - Luffy on August 25, 2005
    EEEEEEEEEEEE! I usually HATE yaoi, but I'm makin' an exception for this. This is the FIRST gay piece I've ever been into. This is hott! I love Magenta! She's so cute! And I always thought of will as a bit of a masochist, loving the domination. Very hott!
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  • From ANON - Blacklilnitecat on August 25, 2005
    OMG!! This is such a HOT story!!! *drools I've been searching for a Will/Warren story and I'm soo happy I found yours!! I hope you'll write more!!
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  • From ANON - Chrysler on August 24, 2005
    That was hot and so very adorable. You should write more Warren/Will fics, i love it!
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  • From ANON - Artemis on August 21, 2005
    oh! is their going to be a second chapter? like an Mpreg? A posible(SP?) set up, from Zach? maybe not, but that would be hot. Great story, i loved it.
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  • From Morrigan on August 19, 2005
    “Is that what you want?” Warren hissed back, his hands now tracing patterns in the sweat gathering on Will’s stomach. “Do you want me to control you? To use you, bend you, take you? Don’t want to be the strong guy anymore?”

    God, that was hot, hot, hot, hot, hot! I love kinky undertones (and overtones). All in all, I was pretty impressed, although I did think that Warren was a little overly affectionate (he doesn't seem like the PDA sort) and I didn't know why Will, an American teenager, was using British slang (bloody), but the sex scene was smoking! Bravo!
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