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Reviews for Jaded

By : rothalion
  • From ANON - yeah on August 04, 2005
    i liked it! that's all i can say!!
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  • From ANON - seraphina-not signed in on July 21, 2005
    Nice job showing a good dynamic between the two. Just be careful with tenses though; you suddenly changed to present tense in the last couple of paragraphs.
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  • From kruemel on July 18, 2005
    such a beautiful, romantic and colourful story. i love the artful and detailed way you describe your scenes.
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  • From ANON - Jar on July 16, 2005
    Impressingly beautiful. I loved every bit of it!
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  • From ANON - Morningstar on July 15, 2005
    This is a nice romantic little piece. Liked how Hephaistion regularly plotted the annoying king's death. Add humour to the situation. The last part was a nice reflection of the way they complement eachother.
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