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Reviews for Clutching My Cure

By : Adair
  • From ANON - Anon on August 17, 2005
    Oh you can't leave it there!!!! Please Please!!!!!

    Poor xan :(
    COME BACK"!!

    :) lina.

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  • From ANON - shanobi on August 15, 2005
    Wow - Very hot Adair! Loved the angry and reluctant attraction. The kiss was done perfectly and was very plausible within the context that you placed them. Loved this line in relation to Bruck:

    **And the only person who could inflame his passion**

    If it weren't for that little fact - this scene wouldn' t have been nearly as entertaining :) It's really the only thing that could bring these two together I think. You handled it brilliantly.

    But poor Xan! I think he knew that Obi would fail the test - but I still feel for him regardless. Obi sure is confused, and I hope Xan realizes that as well. I want them together, but I don't want Obi to have to grovel for it.

    Again - it's so hard to wait fo more! But I can't complain. You're pretty quick with the updates :) Now hurry back with more!

    --shan
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  • From ANON - shanobi on August 13, 2005
    Wonderful Adair!

    Loved the obvious physical attraction of Obi towards Bruck, and Xan's obvious but understated jealousy. The possessive kiss was perfect :) Really rounds out the picture with Obi's jealous thoughts at the beginning. That boy sure is confused. I hope he can get his act together without losing Xan in the process.

    It's going to be hard to wait for the next few chapters! Great writing as always :)

    --shan
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  • From ANON - Kynstar on August 11, 2005
    Oh my! Obi thinks Bruck is handsome? Uh oh! Could be trouble for Chun... :D

    Poor Obi :( feeling jealous and angered over Qui and Xan's affair. Wow Obi has it bad that's for sure for Xan! hehehe well bet that's gonna lead somewhere soon! :D Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Kynstar on August 06, 2005
    Oh my! Obi is gonna have to decide then if he truly does love Xan. That'll be good :D Uh oh Xan is moving the plan into action... Poor Bruck...juz wait until he sees Obi!

    Great work! :D
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  • From ANON - shanobi on August 06, 2005
    Very well done, Adair. I like that this is not the Bruck from the JA books. He's got some depth and he and Jinn seem close and companionable. Curious to see what comes next. Most curious as to Bruck's reaction to Obi. It's gonna be good I'm sure ;) Keep it coming, girl!

    --shan
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  • From ANON - shanobi on August 02, 2005
    Sheesh! I'm getting a little frustrated myself :D Those two!

    I must say however that I'm hoping Obi has a change of heart. He's carried this anger around for so long - maybe Xan and even Qui can help him release it.

    Can't wait for the Obi/Bruck confrontation :) Nice work as always!

    --shan
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  • From ANON - shanobi on July 30, 2005
    I dont' get here nearly as often as i'd like. Wonderful update Adair! I love that Obi's resistance is slowly crumbling and bravo to Xan for his willpower. I hope it will be worth it. These two are absolutely adorable and irresistable together. I don't know what you have planned, but i'm hoping the eventual outcome will be with Obi giving Xan his heart. Of course things are bound to get complicated with Qui and Bruck now in the picture. Looking forward to Bruck's reaction to Obi - and vice versa. I'm finding this highly enjoyable. Keep up the good work!

    --shan
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  • From ANON - Kynstar on July 30, 2005
    Those two... I swear *chuckle* Juz get together again! And with Chapter 8 we see that...well sorta. The 'hold me' is better than nothing! Perhaps Obi wil realize that he does indeed love Xan!

    Poor Qui... he has not a clue what's gonna be instore with him...

    Great work!! Loving this!! :D
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  • From ANON - Loki on July 25, 2005
    Ohhh, I love your Aalto! He's a wonderful friend to Bruck. And Xan being mature and adult about relationships? Wha? LOL!
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  • From Adair on July 25, 2005
    Thanks silver! I think it's safe to say that these two parties will soon be coming face-to-face. Should be...explosive!
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  • From ANON - silver on July 25, 2005
    i hope Obi-Wan meets them again, it'll be interesting to see everyone's reactions!
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  • From ANON - Adair on July 23, 2005
    Hi Shan! Nice to see you here. Glad you're enjoying the twists and turns. I know where I'd like Obi's eventual interest to be, but you never know with him. lol I'm going to try to update at least once a week but will do so more often if the story keeps flowing. Thanks for popping in.
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  • From ANON - shanobi on July 23, 2005
    Well, when you told me you'd expanded on this I had no idea i'd find 5 more wonderful chapters! I just love the premise you've set up. Xan and Obi have a bond, Xan loves Obi, Obi is fighting it, Qui and Xan had a thing, Bruck was/is in love with Obi - so many delicious things going on.

    Just have to wonder what's going to happen when everyone comes face to face and will that grudge of Obi's win over, or will he let it go in favor of love?

    Wonderful work obi_ew! I just love your writing and characterizations. Thanks so much for helping me find my way here ;) I'll be back for sure. Wondering how often you're updating? Guess i'll have to check back. Again - lovely work.

    --shan
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  • From Adair on July 22, 2005
    Thanks again everyone! I'm having a blast with this so far and it's just pouring out at the moment. I have a few twists in store which I hope will please. And don't worry Birdy, Bruck will have his hands full with these two. lol
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