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Reviews for Clutching My Cure

By : Adair
  • From ANON - Anon on October 31, 2005
    Gooo Yoda!!! :)
    The little green jedi will be the perfect match maker hehehe

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  • From ANON - shanobi on October 31, 2005
    While you manage to leave us hanging at the end of each post, just dying for more - it must also be said that there is definatly satisfaction to be had in each and every post. You reveal so much in just a few words - an enviable talent that is ;)

    Can't wait for Xan to show up, and for Yoda and Obi's discussion. Qui obviously knows Xan very well still - and I love how you ended it, with Qui acknowledging his mistakes with his former padawans and wanting to put things right.

    Boy - Garen didn't waist any time did he? :D Lots of pent up sexual tension there - I like it. Hope the boy doesn't end up feeling like second fiddle to Obi. But Garen and Bruck do have much more in common - very good pairing.

    Okay - work on your other stuff if you absolutely HAVE to. You'll have to let me know when you start another fic on tf.n so I can follow along. Catch you later.

    --shan
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  • From Adair on October 30, 2005
    Lori- It was a gentle let down but I think Bruck is still in for some heartbreak when things play out. :(

    Shan- Been reading my mind? :p Bruck and Garen's next confrontation happens sooner rather than later. And I'm curious to see how Xan is recieved also. lol

    Here's another one. Now I need to get to work on my other project so next post may be a few days in coming. Enjoy!! And thanks for reading so faithfully. Even those lurkers out there. :)
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  • From ANON - shanobi on October 29, 2005
    Bruck and Garen - now there's an interesting pair :) I like that you're setting up other possibilities of happiness for Bruck. He deserves it - but sorry, he can't have Obi. He belongs with Xan.

    It seems Obi has made his decision about Bruck, but where does that leave his feelings for Xan? What kind of reception will our tall dark and fallen Jedi receive when he blows into town?

    Can't wait to find out. Oh - and hoping for a possible meeting between Garen and Obi......? Maybe some more sparks will fly between Bruck and Garen??? :D Just a suggestion.

    --shan
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  • From ANON - Lori on October 29, 2005
    Poor Bruck...at least it was a gentle let down, and it looks like he won't be alone for long. I can't wait to read THAT chapter. Ha!

    Lori
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  • From ANON - Lori on October 26, 2005
    “I plan to fight tooth and nail for his love and devotion and I’m not above fighting dirty.”

    You get 'em Xani! I can't wait to watch the fireworks when the two meet up again. Fighting dirty....Puurrrrrrr!

    Eitan is in for a wild ride and I love the way he was talking about the ship. It's no wonder it got to XanMan. Heck, it got to me. Ha!

    Amazing, as always!

    Lori
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  • From ANON - shanobi on October 26, 2005
    Well, I have to admit I was getting a little antsy waiting for this :) You've spoiled me with your quick and regular updates and now i'm just accustomed to them.

    Xan's determination is a pleasure to read - I can't wait to see how he puts his resolve into action. He and Eitan have an obvious firendship, but noticeably complex. Hope to see Eitan hang around for a few more chapters ;)

    Xan really seems to have come to terms with his feelings for Obi and is ready to do whatever it takes to win him back. I hope he goes the romance and honesty route and not the lets make Obi jealous route - while interesting and definately angsty, poor Obi has had enough I think.

    Whatever you do - I'm in. Can't wait for more of this.

    --shan
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  • From Adair on October 26, 2005
    Hi guys! Sorry this one was so long in the making. Had to get caught up elsewhere. Thanks so much for the kind words, they really keep me motivated! Hope the story continues to please. :)
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  • From ANON - shanobi on October 21, 2005
    I'm late for work as I log on just long enough to see if you've posted :D Thank the Force you did! A few more minutes for a review wont hurt I guess ;-)

    I love that there is some emotional closure on the way here. Everything is coming together so nicely. Qui and Obi's talk was very well done and it was so appropriate again that Qui's main concern now is Bruck and doesn't want to see him hurt.

    I'm glad Obi is finally facing his true feelings for both Xan and Bruck. Someone has to get hurt unfortunately, but you're right- Bruck is a big boy. He should know better - and he did. But he's got some awful good memories to carry him through :)

    And you made Master Yoda cry!! One tear conveys so much from our favorite little troll. Nicely done.

    Can't wait for the inevitable confrontation for Xan and Obi and how both will react. Should be interesting as so much as happened between them.

    Can't wait for more.

    --shan
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  • From ANON - Lori on October 20, 2005
    Obi is being honest about his feelings for Bruk...now, if only the stubborn ass would do the same with Xan.

    Great update. I loved Qui's apology!

    Lori
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  • From ANON - Rian on October 20, 2005
    I really like how Obi-Wan realizes that he and Bruck can't give each other what they need. I think he's really going to need Xan when he gets to Corsucant. He can cry on Bruck's shoulder all he wants, but Xan can lend him strength as well.

    By the way, I don't mind reading slash fics, but never had a favorite slash pairing...until now. However, so many Obi/Xan fics are forced/torture. I can't find any others that are consensual. I also like your fic because it deals with the serious emotional aspects of two men in love, not just sex. At any rate, don't worry about the mush, it sets yours apart.
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  • From ANON - shanobi on October 19, 2005
    Eitan?! Now that was surprise, but a pleasant one.

    Nice chemistry in the friendship between the two. He obviously knows Xan well and is bold enough not to take any of his crap.

    I'm looking forward to everyone meeting up on Coruscant ;-) Should be interesting.

    Something also tells me that Yoda and Obi-Wan will come face to face as well, though I'm curious if Obi-Wan will actually go anywhere near the Temple.

    So glad Xan is finally on his way. What a dreadful state he was in!

    --shan
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  • From ANON - Birdy on October 18, 2005
    Eitan!!!!

    :-p
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  • From ANON - Lori on October 18, 2005
    ***blushing*** Oooopps! I read so much this weekend that I did get them mixed up. Sorry!

    Lori
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  • From Adair on October 18, 2005
    Shan- Aalto was well aware of his best friends feelings, even back then. The new post has us checking in on Xan.

    Lori- I feel bad for Bruck also. But he’s a big boy and should know better. Still, I’ll try not to hurt him too much.

    Rian- Thanks! Xan is on his way to Coruscant!

    Lori- Thanks dear, But I think you’re confusing my series. Lol Easy to do. Eitan appears in my Learning Series. I think you’re thinking of the Redemption and Destinies ones. Thanks for reading btw. J

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