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Reviews for Clutching My Cure

By : Adair
  • From Adair on November 14, 2005
    Rian- That’s means a lot. Thanks. I want this to more than just sex without substance. Nothing wrong with that, I enjoy those stories myself, I’m just more used to getting inside the characters minds.

    Lori- I wouldn’t count on seeing anymore Obi and Bruck moments. They both have other parties who wouldn’t like it very much.

    Shan- Sorry Xan has been scare. I think before Obi can commit, he needs to work out all of these other issues. Xan isn’t in today’s new post, but he will pop back up in the next one. Thanks for being patient.

    Blu_dragon- Thanks dear. It means a lot that you delurked. If it makes you feel any better, I’ve never abandoned a story yet. J

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  • From ANON - blu_dragon on November 14, 2005
    Hi I just wanted to tell u that I love this fic its great! One of my faves to keep up w/. I really don't review all that much but I wanted to tell u that I hope u keep updating this one. I look forward to seeing what happens next. Your a great writer keep it up! *hugs*

    blu_dragon
    tryxi
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  • From ANON - Lori on November 14, 2005
    Clearing their throats and straightening mussed clothes, they smiled in unison. “We’re both staying!”

    Ha! I loved your description of 'The Two Stooges'! They make a perfect couple.

    Oh Obi...being so stubborn. I believe the appropriate line is, "Twice the pride, double the fall!"

    Beautiful, as always.

    Lori
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  • From ANON - shanobi on November 12, 2005
    11/12/05 - I'm starting to go into withrawals here! It isn't pretty. I need my 'Cure' fix - and soon.

    --Shan :D
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  • From ANON - shanobi on November 09, 2005
    While i'm very patiently waiting for more of Xan, I want you to know how much I am seriously enjoying these transitional chapters. You are bringing everything together so nicely and it's quite satisfying for me as a reader. Obi's life appears to be coming full circle and I'm willing to bet he'll get the closure he needs to be able to heal and move on - and accept what Xan wants to give him as well.

    Obi appears to use his sexuality to get what he wants, whether he's aware of it or not. I can't wait for the scene with Xan where he finally realizes there's more to sex than just...sex - that what two people can share can be much more than just physical attraction.

    Continuing to enjoy this very much - can't wait for more :)

    --shan
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  • From ANON - Lori on November 07, 2005
    You tease...I thought Bruck and Obi were going to have one last hurrah. ;)

    Yeah! Hopefully, this will be the first of many happy reunions. Once Obi makes peace with his past, maybe he can move on with his future.

    Lori


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  • From ANON - Rian Sage on November 07, 2005
    Hey, I like the smut, don't get me wrong. However, I was glad to see Bruck stop Obi-Wan...of course, I'm sure he thought it was only temporary. Now, was he jealous of Obi-Wan or Garen? Or are we looking forward to another threesome? *sigh* too bad Xan's not there...although, I'm not sure Xan is too interested in sharing Obi-Wan again. I'm protective of Xan and it's getting painful to watch Obi-Wan have sex with other people...unless he realizes it's unfulfilling. Sorry about my suggestive rambling...please ignore it...I'm enjoying the story regardless of who's doing who. : ) If you tug at my heart strings while reading, that's a kudos to you...and you've done that many times.
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  • From ANON - Lori on November 05, 2005
    I'm so glad Bant's in this story! She, of all people, will be able to set Obi straight (well, not too straight :-p ) and help him work through his feelings.

    Bruck is being followed, huh? Good! The sooner Xani finds Obi, the sooner we can watch the fireworks ignite!

    As much as I'm looking forward to seeing the guy together again, I really enjoy these chapters with Bruck. Even though he's 'the other man', I'm starting to like him.

    Lori
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  • From ANON - shanobi on November 05, 2005
    Wonderful chapter. Aalto is such a good friend to Bruck -and knows him so well. I'm glad we got to see Bant - I was wondering if you would include her.

    My - rumors do spread quickly don't they, even at the Jedi Temple ;-) Brucks reaction was true to the character we were first introduced to in the JA books - but so noticeably matured in this AU of yours. This is going to be painful for him - but I have a feeling someone will be there to help him pick up the pieces. And I truly do hope that he and Obi can be good friends - much as Xan may not like it.

    I have no doubt that Obi will make Xan work for it - and I'm very much looking forward to it. Can't wait for the make up sex though :D

    And something tells me Obi will be confronted with one Garen Muln alot sooner than expected. Something also tells me that Bruck isn't going to be too happy about it! Can't wait!

    --shan
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  • From Adair on November 05, 2005
    Lori- Xan is a charmer isn't he? Just something delicious about him. :)

    Shan- I fully intend to have just such a scene at some point. The rate things are going, there may be more than one. ;)

    Rian- I don't think Obi will make it easy on Xan. :D
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  • From ANON - Rian on November 04, 2005
    I'm so glad to see Xan going after what he wants...doesn't he always? I love the interaction between him and Eitan. I'm interested in seeing if Obi will just fly into his arms, or make him work for it (without pushing him away, of course).
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  • From ANON - shanobi on November 03, 2005
    I'm so glad that Eitan didn't take Xan up on his offer. He's just full of integrity - and it suits him well.

    Poor Obi - he seems so lonely.

    That said - I have a request ;-) I'm just absolutely dying for a sweet sex scene. You've had some great, hot scenes and I've enjoyed them all. But I would love to read a scene (when the timing is right of course) when Xan and Obi finally stop being so stubborn and can admit their feelings - a sweet and gentle sex scene that's all about love and much less about sex. With Obi's past - it seems exactly what he needs.

    I'm glad you are enjoying this as much as I am :D I hate to see it end, though eventually I know it will :(

    You rule, girl! Keep coming with the awesome updates.

    --shan
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  • From ANON - Lori on November 03, 2005
    Gulp! That was a sinfully delicious chapter. I'm heading off to bed with visions of naked Jedi dancing in my head. Ha!

    Xan has quickly become one of my favorite Star Wars characters. Well...AU Xan, that is. Purrrrrrr!

    Lori


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  • From Adair on November 01, 2005
    Shan- Hey I updated both places in one day. Yay me! Lol This chapter was kind of just a fun one for me. I love when Xan is being naughty and Eitan is such an easy foil for him.

    Anon- Yoda as matchmaker hum? I can see that.

    Lori- Ha! Garen will reap some benefits from Bruck’s time with Obi Won’t he? If they get together that is. ;) I love writing this story. I adore the characters and it’s fun putting them in situations they’d never be in in the films or books.

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  • From ANON - Lori on October 31, 2005
    Awww...Garen sounds jealous, but soon he'll be thanking Obi for teaching Bruck so many delicious tricks! ;-)

    Is this as much fun to write as it is to read?

    Lori
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